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hi,megha_the_angel thanks! i have read your suggestion seriously i will do my best to organize sentence struture,also to improve my essay.

I write firstly,please help me check it and give a score,thanks 176.The purpose of science is to reassure;the purpose of art is to upset.Therein lies the value of each. In this period fully permeating with science,technology and art,which lead to more and more life complication and social complexity,including increasingly clear recognization of the social and human nature,and confusion of the this.Of course,both science and art possess dual functions:to reassure and to upset,but not solitary result they engender. Firstlly,no one can deny that science facilitate us to understand the nature ,then reassure us.Many years ago,when people didn't know why climate changed,why there were dulge,lighting,thunder,they thought if might be the retribution while they did vicious thing,then they feared.However ,at present,advanced science interpret these phenomens satisfactorily,and predict future case using satellite and computer.Also,modern medicine can not only explain the mechanism of these diseases,and then eliminate many of them,but comprehend the tissue of our body.We can change some of our organs which ill worked,and do several orthopedic operation,even clone succeed in this century.it is obvious to follow the reassure function of science. Nevertheless,while science sets our mind at test,a lot of problems it conducted emerge,many of which is called the catamity of the earth,such as nuclear weapon,Greenhouse effect,even environment pollution.As a stastistical result,the total quantity of atomic bomb is so large that the earth may be destroyed many times.Another thing i have to say is also colne,as mentioned above,indeed it also contradict to the morality as most people consider.So upset effect of science has to be realized.Following the development of science and technology,art also progressed with more and more styles and free topics.The emergence of many of them is due to their purpose exposing hidden problems of society.We usually read some books about shooting to death,subornation,also movies,television,many people,especially children tend to confuse the reality and the stage.Another conspicuous exemple is extraordinary imagination,which is leaded by imaginational art,and quixotism may be.However,no matter whatever it agitates,the art also is an essential part of our life,which can relax our heart and body,as amusement to our life.When we have holiday we often want to go to see the shrine of asts,such as paris,it must be a good chance to loosen and study,also a chance to broaden our sight. When we go to conclusion,i think a clear view has been expressed.Moreover,i want to say is to use the advantage of science and art to develop the society,not only in material,but also in spiritual more effectively,but not to indulge them,in order to reach more stable and harmonious world.