hi ..you have written well giving examples from thy personal life.
you should pay little more emphasis on grammar
i too agree that parents should be patient and be level headed.
children too shuld be more open towards sharing their feelings with their parents obeying them whenever they something if they feel their children are doing wrong..
mutual understanding has to be there on either side.
u can also give examples of nowadays students becoming addicted to drugs and porn etc due to lack of proper parent counseling.
they have started dictating their parents.
anyways well written..
hope u do well...