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"Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places." The famous proverb “To err is human” emphasizes on the fact that it is the human nature to commit errors knowingly or unknowingly. Nowadays the crime rate has increased by leaps and bounds. The judicial system has started to take measures to rigidize the punishment. But the treatment meted out to the violators of law should be depending upon the situation in which the crime was committed, mental status and background of the criminal and his relation with the victim. Several disturbed persons sometimes resort to crime to escape the agony of mental distress. Nowadays teenagers from broken homes are also committing coldblooded murders which can be attributed to the void in their hearts due to poor upbringing. Similarly love affairs and illegitimate issues are also strong reasons in violence crimes. The criminals should also be given a chance to rehabilitate themselves like engaging in meditation, yoga and encouraging them to follow their hobbies. Law should pronounce the judgment after thorough scrutiny of the case. Innocent people should not be tried for crimes they don’t commit. Teenagers being tried for crime should be encouraged to study further even when in prison and make them realize the worth of human life. The path of nirvana can be followed by these criminals while on trial to reform themselves. The criminals should realize the mistakes that they have committed and promise to lead a happy and contented life. This is possible only if the law helps them by sentencing them to prison but allowing them to reform themselves.

Education is purely a personal matter; it has little to do with school or college. Education is the basic right of every human being. Education is not merely a degree only but all round intellectual development for a person. An educated person is self-sufficient. I agree with the viewpoint because firstly I feel the need to be educated should arise within oneself without any one prompting or suggesting to him. He should be motivated by himself to be educated. It depends on self-interest and thirst to gain knowledge. Secondly colleges and schools are just a pillar they are not the foundation for education. The person can rely on them whenever in need but not always. The zeal to learn should be purely personal interest. He cannot be spoonfed by his teachers but van discuss several points with them. This will enchance his speaking skills. The person should not feel that education is a burden otherwise this negative attitude may retard his intellectual development.He should be hardworking and disciplined towards his goal.The effect of colleges and schools is not having much influence his education as they just provide guidelines and the rest depends on the person. Education should become a boon making the person to strive towards pinnacles of success achieving recognition. please post your comments which will help me to modify my style of writing..:):)

hi ..you have written well giving examples from ur personal life. you should pay little more emphasis on grammar:) i too agree that parents should be patient and be level headed. children too shuld be more open towards sharing their feelings with their parents obeying them whenever they something if they feel their children are doing wrong.. mutual understanding has to be there on either side.:):) u can also give examples of nowadays students becoming addicted to drugs and porn etc due to lack of proper parent counseling. they have started dictating their parents. anyways well written.. hope u do well...:grad:

hi,,, you have written the reason well but you need to emphasis more on how u justify the reason.:hmm: all cannot make realistic plans sometimes we get what we are destined to get somewhat like suppose a student though had prepared very well with systemic planning to get admission in a grad school but it didnt happen..how can we say that it is due to lack of proper planning? i think your both reasons somewhat relate to same. so enchamce your skills further ..;) you think well so put it in words otherwise how will the examiner know ur ideas... all the best....know u will do well:):)

but you have given some good points...but keep in mind that elaborationg too much may give examiner headache.. anyhow well written!!!!!

yes..i too feel viewpoints may differ from individual to individual.. but any viewpoint has to be justified strongly... so dont worry over the comments..

Thanks essay899 for ur comment...i will go through the pattern which i may have overlooked..:):hmm: Thanks shiric for nice comment..i think i have to improve further on my style.:rolleyes::)

hi...that was well written:) But personally i feel that teachers should discuss their viewpoint on such issues with students encouraging a healthy discussion without heated arguments and students should be asked to speak their minds out on such topics. Teachers if only pay emphasis on academics then they will become stereotype. So they also need to encourage group discussions which will improve the speaking skills of the students.:grad:

it has been written good but i feel that nowadays people work not only for money but to gain recognition and have a successful career.nowadays everyone wants to be achieve much.you should elaborate now why you choose which of the options? Better luck...but it has been a good attempt..

"Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places." The famous proverb “To err is human” emphasizes on the fact that it is the human nature to commit errors knowingly or unknowingly. Nowadays the crime rate has increased by leaps and bounds. The judicial system has started to take measures to rigidize the punishment. But the treatment meted out to the violators of law should be depending upon the situation in which the crime was committed, mental status and background of the criminal and his relation with the victim. Several disturbed persons sometimes resort to crime to escape the agony of mental distress. Nowadays teenagers from broken homes are also committing coldblooded murders which can be attributed to the void in their hearts due to poor upbringing. Similarly love affairs and illegitimate issues are also strong reasons in violence crimes. The criminals should also be given a chance to rehabilitate themselves like engaging in meditation, yoga and encouraging them to follow their hobbies. Law should pronounce the judgment after thorough scrutiny of the case. Innocent people should not be tried for crimes they don’t commit. Teenagers being tried for crime should be encouraged to study further even when in prison and make them realize the worth of human life. The path of nirvana can be followed by these criminals while on trial to reform themselves. The criminals should realize the mistakes that they have committed and promise to lead a happy and contented life. This is possible only if the law helps them by sentencing them to prison but allowing them to reform themselves.