newgmater

Hi CTG, I have been following your thread on your GMAT success story. First of all, Congratulations on your impressing GMAT score and Best of Luck in your future study plans. Like many of us here, I have been struggling to get good grip on AWA section. I have downloaded your essay templates and started practicing essay writing. I wonder if you could upload a **Sample Essay** for each section using your template. This could help many of us to get the idea of high scouring essay writing. Thank you.

Congratulations! Good to know that you have cracked 700 barrier. I am trying to get good grip on AWA essay writing. Since you have scored very well in AWA, could you please post your template for AWA essays and one **Sample Essay** for each section.

Urban officials want the census to be as accurate and complete as possible for the reason that the amount of low-income people in a given area affect the distribution of about fifty billion dollars a year in federal funds. (A) for the reason that the amount of low-income people in a given area affect (B) for the reason because the amount of low-income people in a given area effects © in that the amount of low-income people in given areas effect (D) because the number of low-income people in a given area affects (E) because the numbers of low-income people in given areas effects I am confused between D and E. I prefer E over D because '.. given areas' in E covers the all areas where as 'a given area' in D implies any one area effects the distribution of about fifty billion dollars ... :hmm:

Try this link: http://www.www.urch.com/forums/showthread.php?t=700

Many children ride their bicycles at night unprotected by neither rudimentary safety equipment, reflectors, nor headlights. (A) neither rudimentary safety equipment, reflectors, nor (B) neither rudimentary safety equipment, reflectors, or © rudimentary safety equipment, reflectors, or (D) rudimentary safety equipment, reflectors, nor (E) either rudimentary safety equipment, reflectors or What is wrong with A? (Ans is C)

I have seen the following question somewhere in this forum with no explanation. Can some one please explain why answer is D? (Is it a GMAT question?) None of the attempts to specify the causes of crime explains why most of the people exposed to the alleged causes do not commit crimes and, conversely, why so many of those not so exposed have. (A) have (B) has © shall (D) do (E) could Thanks in advance.

The reason why the winged bean can thrive on poor soil is because their roots house bacteria that can turn atmospheric nitrogen into fertilizer. (A) is because their roots house bacteria that can turn (B) is because its roots house bacteria which can turn © is that their roots house bacteria turning (D) is that its roots house bacteria that can turn (E) being that its roots house bacteria and can turn Correct answer is D. What is wrong with B?

Yes. C is OA. Thank you for your clear explanation.

At the beginning of the nineteenth century, the German-English astronomer William Herschel suggested that sunspots were holes in the flaming atmosphere of the sun, that through them the dark and cool surface of the sun itself could be seen, and this dark surface might be inhabited. (A) itself could be seen, and this dark surface might be inhabited (B) itself could be seen, and that dark surface might be inhabited © itself could be seen, and that this dark surface might be inhabited (D) could be seen itself, and this dark surface might have inhabitants (E) could itself have been seen, and that dark surface might have inhabitants Could someone please explain?