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Hi there , please leave any comment for my essay I like to save money for later usage , but lots of my friends like to spend to the last of their coins whenever they've got any . They say that not only satisfies their needs , but also gives them the fun of being generous and noble . But I don't think so . I don't ignore that shopping and entertainment in our modern times are very attractive , but thy're not too irresistable to spend the last of our coins on . Besides , there are unlimited number of things we want to buy , but the amount of mnoney we have is fixed . As a result , the fun will end soon and we'll be dissapointed quickly . But that's just the side effect . The worst thing is that there will be nothing left for emergency cases such as illness , dimission , which happen more and more frequently nowadays . In the other hand , though saving monry will not gives us the instant fun , it surely brings a number of benefits . There will be difficulties at first because we have to dominate our passion , but the result is worthy . For those who enjoy risks and like to invest or open a business , savings will be theirs great starting stock . Those who enjoy peacefull life can invest their savings to retirement plan and insurance that will almost guarantee the rest of their lives . In every aspect , ones who save their money will have distinct advantages over others who enjoy spending all of their money as soon as they have it . These are my opinions and you may disagree with them . However , unless you marry a rich person , rob a bank or win a special lottery ticket , money doesn't come easily . So using it wisely and remaining the master of it is not a wild goose chase in any circumstances .

Hey everyone , now I'm beginning to improve my writing skill , please leave your comment about my essay . It took me over an hour to write, revise and rewrite it neaty and clearly . Knowledge is invaluable , and no one disagree about it . But when discussing which source of knowledge is better : books or experience , people are very different in opinion . Some consider books the better while ohter oppose that and praise experience .To have the right estimation about them , whe should analyse each one's weakness and strength . Books do have some advantages over experience . Since they are cheap and easy to access , the knowledge from books spreads very quickly . Moreover , the information in books are well organized into directories , so it takes less time to fimnd what we want to discover.Books are also an effective tools to dieminate common knowledge because they are written very clealy and concisely . However , the lack of reality is book's weakest points whereas it is experience' strongest . And if there's no reality , we study for nothing . But the problem when study through experience is that we will encounter a lot of failure to master the knowledge , and sometimes , the price we have to pay is very high , bot on material and spirit . However , because of its close contact with reality , we will remember the knowledge from experience longer than those from books . Now it gets confusing . Each has its unique points , so which is the better one ? I think that both of them are equal since the strongests poitns of knowledge from books can suuport the eakest point in experience knowledge very well . In fact , we can reduce the risk of failure and the high price by reseaching carfully on books .Then , we apply to reality and learn through experience to remember longer . So , instead of arguing and try to disvalue one of them , by combining both , we can get the best result of our effort , isn't it a good thing ?