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I got R-8 L-24 S-24 W-20 can anyone suggest what should I do? I know I did good in all the sections....and 8......i don't think this is my score at all...

Hi everyone, can anyone guide me here please.

Hi rs shruti, your essay is short, I don't think its of 300 words, So for that reason you will get around 3- 3.5.

Hi, I am in the same situation, planning to take my exam 2nd time. So I don't think I can advise you, but definitely I can suggest you to add some examples. For example in this essay, you can put example of a child, her health. And of course you can add 2/3 common disease caused by smoking like cough, infections etc. Can write more about passive smoking and smoking areas too.

Good and different thoughts.....glad to read them....thanks to share your views. I hope, if essay Que on this topic (for debate) comes in my test , I would be able to write some of your thoughts......

This essay can get 2.5 -3.

Good essay! on the scale of 1-5, this essay can get 4.5

Grading system changes according to universities. All of them have some particular rule which is applied to different university. In some classes, course grades are based on solely on exam but in other it includes students participation too. Classes which gives grades on the final exams, expects students to have all the information regarding the study materials. Usually these exams include, writing and oral/speaking tests. In writing exam they expect you to have writing skills and complete knowledge about the question were asked. But in oral exams, student need to answer the question by talking and explaining. For this task he or she need to have more knowledge to give the answer satisfactory and some times he/she might have to debate also. Some schools where class participation is important, they want students to debate in the class, present seminars etc. This system wants to expose students to may questions, so that they can imagin more, such students likely to conversate good, and success more in their lives. Although, I know participation in the class make you more active and help to start preparing students early to survie in this world like for job, and also self improvement is more in this type of system, I prefer to exams based on soley course grade. The reason for holding this opinion is because I have studied in schools, and I feel really comfortable to take such exams. Another reason for holding the opinion is, during class participation there are more chances to get invloeved in class fights, hate which might lead to some problems such as loosing best friend due to debate. And I am a person who doesn't like to fight over some debate. To conclude myself, I like to go to school for fun, friends and most of all for knowledge. If I fall into situations like fights and all I won't be able to focus on studies. And because I like the course grade system I prefer this over the system which includes grades.

Hi Alisher, thanks for your comments. You know theoretically I know the rules of grammar and correct spellings too. But practically I am not doing well. I need to do some more practice I guess...... Taking my exam on this week end. Hope to do well and score good. Chalo then, Thanks again.

Technology that you think important...Time-30mis....Spelling mistake--6 corrected. Words-? Points -- you tell me and also suggest where to improve. Thanks.... These days scientist are working hard and proving us new and useful technology. One of the technology is Internet. Internet may not be available to everyone but more than sixty percent of the people are using it. Internet is the most important aid of communication, radar reading, access to various information like news, and distant learning. Communication is the most important factor for everyone. Specially for the business purpose, people who are living far way from their families. Internet is reasonable and less expensive as compare to telephone or cellular phones. So to improve the business internationally people use Internet. Through Internet one can communicate by three ways, There is email, chat by writing, and voice chat. All of them used by lot of people daily. Radar reading, we all know how important it is. These days we are using computers and Internet to read weather, global worming in different area. Distant learning is one other very useful thing. Those who can not go out of the town or up to the class can use Internet. For example, If I want to go to New York to attend one particular course and I am not getting leave form my working department, still I can do the course with the help of Internet according to my convenience. Internet also provide you different news. One can get all the information all the time without depending on time like news on TV. And beside can get news from all over the country,and world. On Internet we can get different study material too. For example, my friend wanted to take National Bord Exam. For that she want to refer some books and as those books were too expensive and material was limited, She end up using E book, which we can use on Internet.Everyone must know this technology to improve themselves. To conclude my self , I want to say that this the grate technology and people around the world is using it. I am using this technology everyday of my life and will continue doing that

Hi awhig, Thanks, I am amazed by this score. I hope I will to do this well in TOEFL test but without grammatical mistakes. Thanks again.

Distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom learning. Do you agree/disagree In this technological world if you don't know how to use computer and Internet then its a big disadvantage. This is because these days people are taking part time course or full time course on Internet. Those who have all the information regarding the online classes will of course lead as compare to others. But to really understand learn,and to motivate we will need a teacher who will clear our thoughts,and who will give a good shape to our future. In my opinion, distance learning and online computer classes should not be replace classroom learning. We can use these technologies an aid in our education and not as a system which will replace our teachers,lecturers or professors. For an example, to read we need to learn alphabets which is taught to us by out teacher. Then we slowly learn to read. And now that we can read we can be able to use computers. The other disadvantage over online classes is you have depend on so many things such as computers,electricity, high speed Internet connection, may be telephones and some assistance or help from a friend who understands computers well. We do not have to rely on so many things in classroom learning, we just need a teacher. According to my views both the methods of learning are important but the most important is classroom learning because in classroom we get motivated by watching other kids performance, we get highly influenced by the teachers words. We become little bit competitive. In online class we are the only one who is in the class and no other motivation. To conclude my views, I would say I will be more interested in online classes to do some continuing courses But for basic knowledge I would prefer classroom learning where I will get all the support and information and knowledge from my teacher. --

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. In my opinion, communication is important, No matter what is the type of communication. All the types of communication has different advantages and disadvantages. Advantages of letters ,emails, and telephones are: Fast, less time consuming, You can contact the person anytime, and No matter how far that person lives, you can be in touch with them. Emails,Telephone calls are very fast. All new technologies are very fast.I would like to give an simple example of 911 call. If you are in any kind of trouble, call 911. Someone who attended your call will send you help immediately. Communication through Internet is even better. It is less expensive, and you can get all the information on it. Letters are easy, if any one don't have knowledge of new technologies, they can use letters. This is the most useful tool in that you don't have to have computer or any other machines. All of them are good for good business communication to improve. Disadvantage of all these types of communication are: dependent on the connection, electricity to recharge the laptops and cell phones, and expensive if used more than limited time. And other thing is you use this things with your near and dear once, then they might not feel very good about it. Face-to-face communication is always better,but it also have two sides of advantage and disadvantage. In the final interview in any company, school appoint you for this interview. This is because in that interview they want to see you in person, Who are you in real, they want to see your body language, your effectiveness etc. This type of communication always make your dear ones feel happy, to show their kindness,love to you. Disadvantage: if you live far away from that place you have to commute which is time consuming and expensive and of course the journey is tyring. To conclude this, I can say all the types of communication has good and bad sides like a coin. But they are important to keep the person in touch with all the thing he or she wants.

Hi awhig, I thought, I will get the corrections on Monday,But looks like you don't take weekend off. I really appriciate your inputs in correcting the essay. The points you wrote in your post are really interesting,I never thought of them. Thanks again. Tulaja.

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Food is what we all need to survive.These days preparing meals become a lot more easier as compare to old times.The reason behind that is we get the food in frozen and in chopped forms and different fast food in the store which we have heat up in oven and its ready to eat. It saves ample amount of time.But it is not that nutritious.An it is not healthy either.But still so many people use them. Frozen and chopped food saves lot of time while preparing meals.If I want to make some vegetable fried rice,for that I will need chopped vegetables.To cut and wash different vegetables I will require at least thirty minutes,to fry them another thirty minutes and to cook the rice with that half an hour more .So total time I am spending to cook is one and a half hour and it is time consuming. And if I use the the pre-chopped vegetables I will save at least half an hour. There are different precooked food is available in the stores,which we have to keep in the oven for five to ten minutes and that is more time saving.All different food like breads,pastas,spaghetti's,sauce,macaroni and cheeses are available. And all you have to do is boil and serve with the souse .They are all easier to prepare and taste good too. But the question here is whether the food is nutritious and healthy or not?No it is not.They don't provide us the daily requirements of the vitamins,calcium,iron and other stuff.Even though we are eating the food which contains the vegetables which suppose to provide us the vitamins . The reason behind that is the vegetables are frozen,it can not provide you the nutrients which are present in the freshly chopped vegetables. The breads,fast food they are not good for your heath either,they will cause decay in your teeth.And they contain high level of cholesterol and calories which are more prone cause heart attack and high blood pressure like diseases. We all know the effects and side effect of the food,and we also know that what we are suppose to do.But we all use them it to save the time. In this century ,there are so many new technology and different things which we all want to learn,and for that we need time.Theses days time is money But we should not forget Heath is wealth.