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I got R-8 L-24 S-24 W-20 can anyone suggest what should I do? I know I did good in all the sections....and 8......i don't think this is my score at all...

Hi everyone, can anyone guide me here please.

Hi rs shruti, your essay is short, I don't think its of 300 words, So for that reason you will get around 3- 3.5.

Hi, I am in the same situation, planning to take my exam 2nd time. So I don't think I can advise you, but definitely I can suggest you to add some examples. For example in this essay, you can put example of a child, her health. And of course you can add 2/3 common disease caused by smoking like cough, infections etc. Can write more about passive smoking and smoking areas too.

Good and different thoughts.....glad to read them....thanks to share your views. I hope, if essay Que on this topic (for debate) comes in my test , I would be able to write some of your thoughts......

This essay can get 2.5 -3.

Good essay! on the scale of 1-5, this essay can get 4.5

Grading system changes according to universities. All of them have some particular rule which is applied to different university. In some classes, course grades are based on solely on exam but in other it includes students participation too. Classes which gives grades on the final exams, expects students to have all the information regarding the study materials. Usually these exams include, writing and oral/speaking tests. In writing exam they expect you to have writing skills and complete knowledge about the question were asked. But in oral exams, student need to answer the question by talking and explaining. For this task he or she need to have more knowledge to give the answer satisfactory and some times he/she might have to debate also. Some schools where class participation is important, they want students to debate in the class, present seminars etc. This system wants to expose students to may questions, so that they can imagin more, such students likely to conversate good, and success more in their lives. Although, I know participation in the class make you more active and help to start preparing students early to survie in this world like for job, and also self improvement is more in this type of system, I prefer to exams based on soley course grade. The reason for holding this opinion is because I have studied in schools, and I feel really comfortable to take such exams. Another reason for holding the opinion is, during class participation there are more chances to get invloeved in class fights, hate which might lead to some problems such as loosing best friend due to debate. And I am a person who doesn't like to fight over some debate. To conclude myself, I like to go to school for fun, friends and most of all for knowledge. If I fall into situations like fights and all I won't be able to focus on studies. And because I like the course grade system I prefer this over the system which includes grades.

Hi Alisher, thanks for your comments. You know theoretically I know the rules of grammar and correct spellings too. But practically I am not doing well. I need to do some more practice I guess...... Taking my exam on this week end. Hope to do well and score good. Chalo then, Thanks again.

Technology that you think important...Time-30mis....Spelling mistake--6 corrected. Words-? Points -- you tell me and also suggest where to improve. Thanks.... These days scientist are working hard and proving us new and useful technology. One of the technology is Internet. Internet may not be available to everyone but more than sixty percent of the people are using it. Internet is the most important aid of communication, radar reading, access to various information like news, and distant learning. Communication is the most important factor for everyone. Specially for the business purpose, people who are living far way from their families. Internet is reasonable and less expensive as compare to telephone or cellular phones. So to improve the business internationally people use Internet. Through Internet one can communicate by three ways, There is email, chat by writing, and voice chat. All of them used by lot of people daily. Radar reading, we all know how important it is. These days we are using computers and Internet to read weather, global worming in different area. Distant learning is one other very useful thing. Those who can not go out of the town or up to the class can use Internet. For example, If I want to go to New York to attend one particular course and I am not getting leave form my working department, still I can do the course with the help of Internet according to my convenience. Internet also provide you different news. One can get all the information all the time without depending on time like news on TV. And beside can get news from all over the country,and world. On Internet we can get different study material too. For example, my friend wanted to take National Bord Exam. For that she want to refer some books and as those books were too expensive and material was limited, She end up using E book, which we can use on Internet.Everyone must know this technology to improve themselves. To conclude my self , I want to say that this the grate technology and people around the world is using it. I am using this technology everyday of my life and will continue doing that

Hi awhig, Thanks, I am amazed by this score. I hope I will to do this well in TOEFL test but without grammatical mistakes. Thanks again.

Distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom learning. Do you agree/disagree In this technological world if you don't know how to use computer and Internet then its a big disadvantage. This is because these days people are taking part time course or full time course on Internet. Those who have all the information regarding the online classes will of course lead as compare to others. But to really understand learn,and to motivate we will need a teacher who will clear our thoughts,and who will give a good shape to our future. In my opinion, distance learning and online computer classes should not be replace classroom learning. We can use these technologies an aid in our education and not as a system which will replace our teachers,lecturers or professors. For an example, to read we need to learn alphabets which is taught to us by out teacher. Then we slowly learn to read. And now that we can read we can be able to use computers. The other disadvantage over online classes is you have depend on so many things such as computers,electricity, high speed Internet connection, may be telephones and some assistance or help from a friend who understands computers well. We do not have to rely on so many things in classroom learning, we just need a teacher. According to my views both the methods of learning are important but the most important is classroom learning because in classroom we get motivated by watching other kids performance, we get highly influenced by the teachers words. We become little bit competitive. In online class we are the only one who is in the class and no other motivation. To conclude my views, I would say I will be more interested in online classes to do some continuing courses But for basic knowledge I would prefer classroom learning where I will get all the support and information and knowledge from my teacher. --

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. In my opinion, communication is important, No matter what is the type of communication. All the types of communication has different advantages and disadvantages. Advantages of letters ,emails, and telephones are: Fast, less time consuming, You can contact the person anytime, and No matter how far that person lives, you can be in touch with them. Emails,Telephone calls are very fast. All new technologies are very fast.I would like to give an simple example of 911 call. If you are in any kind of trouble, call 911. Someone who attended your call will send you help immediately. Communication through Internet is even better. It is less expensive, and you can get all the information on it. Letters are easy, if any one don't have knowledge of new technologies, they can use letters. This is the most useful tool in that you don't have to have computer or any other machines. All of them are good for good business communication to improve. Disadvantage of all these types of communication are: dependent on the connection, electricity to recharge the laptops and cell phones, and expensive if used more than limited time. And other thing is you use this things with your near and dear once, then they might not feel very good about it. Face-to-face communication is always better,but it also have two sides of advantage and disadvantage. In the final interview in any company, school appoint you for this interview. This is because in that interview they want to see you in person, Who are you in real, they want to see your body language, your effectiveness etc. This type of communication always make your dear ones feel happy, to show their kindness,love to you. Disadvantage: if you live far away from that place you have to commute which is time consuming and expensive and of course the journey is tyring. To conclude this, I can say all the types of communication has good and bad sides like a coin. But they are important to keep the person in touch with all the thing he or she wants.

Hi awhig, I thought, I will get the corrections on Monday,But looks like you don't take weekend off. I really appriciate your inputs in correcting the essay. The points you wrote in your post are really interesting,I never thought of them. Thanks again. Tulaja.

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Food is what we all need to survive.These days preparing meals become a lot more easier as compare to old times.The reason behind that is we get the food in frozen and in chopped forms and different fast food in the store which we have heat up in oven and its ready to eat. It saves ample amount of time.But it is not that nutritious.An it is not healthy either.But still so many people use them. Frozen and chopped food saves lot of time while preparing meals.If I want to make some vegetable fried rice,for that I will need chopped vegetables.To cut and wash different vegetables I will require at least thirty minutes,to fry them another thirty minutes and to cook the rice with that half an hour more .So total time I am spending to cook is one and a half hour and it is time consuming. And if I use the the pre-chopped vegetables I will save at least half an hour. There are different precooked food is available in the stores,which we have to keep in the oven for five to ten minutes and that is more time saving.All different food like breads,pastas,spaghetti's,sauce,macaroni and cheeses are available. And all you have to do is boil and serve with the souse .They are all easier to prepare and taste good too. But the question here is whether the food is nutritious and healthy or not?No it is not.They don't provide us the daily requirements of the vitamins,calcium,iron and other stuff.Even though we are eating the food which contains the vegetables which suppose to provide us the vitamins . The reason behind that is the vegetables are frozen,it can not provide you the nutrients which are present in the freshly chopped vegetables. The breads,fast food they are not good for your heath either,they will cause decay in your teeth.And they contain high level of cholesterol and calories which are more prone cause heart attack and high blood pressure like diseases. We all know the effects and side effect of the food,and we also know that what we are suppose to do.But we all use them it to save the time. In this century ,there are so many new technology and different things which we all want to learn,and for that we need time.Theses days time is money But we should not forget Heath is wealth.

Hello sir, Thank you again! I really appriciate your help. Thanks again Tulaja

In my opinion, studying all the subjects is important to get a general idea of the world. But the further or advanced educational is totally depend on the subjects you like. I like science and maths, and feel history and literature are dry subjects.But as I mentioned earlier It depends upon your liking and disliking of the subject. There reason I like science and mathematics is because need to be use your brains a lot and the other thing is science is so vast, like a never ending story. All the new technologies, machines , instruments are totally depend on science and maths. To present my view, I would like to give a example of constructing a bridge. It is not very easy to build the bridge, for that one should have the ideas and detailed knowledge in architect, which is the branch of combined mathematics and science. If this engineer is lacking in knowledge then bridge will fall and that will be a dangerous situation. As for the subject history, which in my opinion is a dry subject,one can find it very interesting. History is the important subject to understand the so that we should not repeat the same thing,which was wrong in the future. You can read history of different different countries and what happened,and what they did to get freedom .All the battles, politics, people who made us proud you can all this ting from history. Mr.Gandhi,who was from India sets an example of hoe to be polite. I remember something to give an example,If some slap you on one side of the face just to prove that he correct and you are wrong,Do not react to that slap ,present your other side of face to him. This way that person will understand his mistake on his own. So there are some good people also in history from which we can learn and make them as our ideal. TO conclude, I will say all the subjects and all the people like politician,doctors engineers,teachers etc .It all depends upon you. But as for me I like science and mathematics so that is the reason I disagree with the statement

Hi awhiq, Thanks a lot!

4. It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? "Not everything that is learned is contained in books", In my opinion, this sentence have some weight age. In the following paragraphs I would like to compare the knowledge gained from the experience and books. "Your eyes can not see , what your mind dose not know". So yes, you need to read the books to know. You can get knowledge from books on everything for example: history, biology, computers etc. It is important to read books to get the knowledge from different aspect. There are some holy books such as Bible, Bhagvat-gita, Kuran etc. People says a person should read a holy book at least once in his life. I think people read all the books thought out their life, but most of the time they do not use that knowledge in their day to day activity. This is where experience teaches us where we went wrong, and what should we do if the same thing repeats. To support the above comments, I would like to give a simple example: Suppose a person is reading a Holy book and learning what God wants you to do when thirsty person come to you and asking a glass of water. In the holy book, god will always tell you to help the person but instead if helping that person,the other person humiliate him, embarrassed him. Is this how you use what you learnt? Person, based on his experience knowledge will try to understand if there is any threat from the person or not. He will not humiliate the person in trouble,because he understander and already experienced that kind of pain. Knowledge is treasure, but practice is the key to it. During the practice you get the experience and you slowly start improving. That is what our teachers do to help us. They want us to practice so that we will be ready when exams come. With the correspondence of the above statements and example and with the help of my personal experience, I think, the knowledge base on the experience is important.

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Hello, can you please check this essay,and tell me what shall i do to improve. And how many points I can get in this essay? Thanks 4. It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? "Not everything that is learned is contained in books", In my opinion, this sentence have some weight age. In the following paragraphs I would like to compare the knowledge gained from the experience and books. "Your eyes can not see , what your mind dose not know". So yes, you need to read the books to know. You can get knowledge from books on everything for example: history, biology, computers etc. It is important to read books to get the knowledge from different aspect. There are some holy books such as Bible, Bhagvat-gita, Kuran etc. People says a person should read a holy book at least once in his life. I think people read all the books thought out their life, but most of the time they do not use that knowledge in their day to day activity. This is where experience teaches us where we went wrong, and what should we do if the same thing repeats. To support the above comments, I would like to give a simple example: Suppose a person is reading a Holy book and learning what God wants you to do when thirsty person come to you and asking a glass of water. In the holy book, god will always tell you to help the person but instead if helping that person,the other person humiliate him, embarrassed him. Is this how you use what you learnt? Person, based on his experience knowledge will try to understand if there is any threat from the person or not. He will not humiliate the person in trouble,because he understander and already experienced that kind of pain. Knowledge is treasure, but practice is the key to it. During the practice you get the experience and you slowly start improving. That is what our teachers do to help us. They want us to practice so that we will be ready when exams come. With the correspondence of the above statements and example and with the help of my personal experience, I think, the knowledge base on the experience is important.

Hello teachers and friends, please read this essay and give me the corrections .I finished this essay in 32 mins. Please let me know how much points I can get in this essay. Thanks Tulaja How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. Media always have influence people's behavior.Most of the times it is totally different than the reality.There are some educational movies,cartoon films and movies on fairy tales.Some of them are inspiring and encouraging and motivating. And there are some action,violent and horror movies also.The daily News on TV which are important too.They are also addictive and time consuming.They all have different effects on different people. For children there are lots of educational movies some of them are Disney,Leap Frog which helps children to learn alphabets, counting, colors etc.Cartoon films which make them happy and teaches them a lot like shearing,helping and caring.And those simple acts helps them to be a better person.Fairy tales shows some amazing things which broadens the imagination power of the kids. Some movies based on real life are motivating.Those movies make you feel that even you can do things which are out of your reach, you want to work hard if you watch such movies.Inspiring and encouraging movies are also there,they help you in certain ways.And besides that they are entertaining. But some television shows and movies are violent.Lots of action scenes,and murders, terrors which are not good. They influence the kids to act like that.Horror shows and movies are even worst, some people can't even sleep if they watch it.Other disadvantages of movies and TV shows are: they are addictive, time consuming.Because of that your outdoor activities reduces and it automatically affect your health due to less physical activity.Besides that the rays coming out of the television are harmful to the eyes.This may be the reason behind using glasses and lenses these days. To conclude, Television and Movies have both advantage and disadvantage.It will teach you all goo and bad stuffs.It all depend upon parents and people watching it.For kids parents have to guide them,and tell them that this is good you should do that.But if something is wrong you got to tell them immediately.For adults,they know everything what to take and what to avoid from that.They can read the instruction before watching the movie. All in all,Guide yourself while watching all kinds of shows and movies.And always try to get something good from that.

Hi friends! can you please check this essay and tell how is my my work? thanks tulaja Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I strongly agree with the statement "Parents are the best teachers".That is because children are very close to their parents. They believe in them and because children know that in presence of their parents nothing will harm them.Parents gives children all confidence and support.But that doesn't mean that I don't believe in teacher who teaches them at school. When the fetus is in the mothers womb since that time he is hearing the parents.When the baby is born first thing he understands is parents.Baby slowly learn to talk,walk,run,count,read with the help of parent.At that time parents are the only teacher to the child.Small things like grabbing the spoon and eating is taught to all of us by our parents.Right now you must be thinking all these tasks are easy.Yes,but when you are a baby you need support,comfort,encouragement.And all of it is provided by the parents. Children believe in their parents and they feel confident in their presence.I would like to give one good example for it,If you take a your child to the swimming pool he will scare on the day one.But he will sit and play with you in the pool the same day.On second day he will try walk in the pool while holding your hand.On third day he will try to walk by himself but in your presence.And this is how he will learn to swim.So this is how I believe that kids believe that nothing is going to harm them in the presence of their parents. Every day parents slowly and unknowingly teaches to their kid how to survive in this world.And when the child grows up ,he accomplished all the survival task and try to apply in his life.Sometimes he fails and sometimes he pass and day by day he build up the confidence in him.Whenever he fails parents support the child and encourage him to take second attempt.And this how I explained my point of view regarding parents providing kids confidence and support. I believe in teaches also.They teaches our children so many different things.I would like to give one very simple example to support my words.If a boy wants to join a medical school and his parents are not even graduated,then what?Its A funny example,but have some weightage.Someone can't simply rely on home schooling.You have to send your kids to school for higher education,their they get all the guidance from the teachers. In conclusion, I would like to say that Parents are the most beneficial instructors and the best teachers.And Parents ,you also believe in your children give them time and provide the best answers to all their question and also ask Questions to improve the kids skill.It will also help in strong bond between the parent and children.Although You can't rely merely on parents teaching,But still all the kids will get all the best from their parents.

Hi Erin, Can you please check this essay and tell how is my my work? thanks tulaja Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I strongly agree with the statement "Parents are the best teachers".That is because children are very close to their parents. They believe in them and because children know that in presence of their parents nothing will harm them.Parents gives children all confidence and support.But that doesn't mean that I don't believe in teacher who teaches them at school. When the fetus is in the mothers womb since that time he is hearing the parents.When the baby is born first thing he understands is parents.Baby slowly learn to talk,walk,run,count,read with the help of parent.At that time parents are the only teacher to the child.Small things like grabbing the spoon and eating is taught to all of us by our parents.Right now you must be thinking all these tasks are easy.Yes,but when you are a baby you need support,comfort,encouragement.And all of it is provided by the parents. Children believe in their parents and they feel confident in their presence.I would like to give one good example for it,If you take a your child to the swimming pool he will scare on the day one.But he will sit and play with you in the pool the same day.On second day he will try walk in the pool while holding your hand.On third day he will try to walk by himself but in your presence.And this is how he will learn to swim.So this is how I believe that kids believe that nothing is going to harm them in the presence of their parents. Every day parents slowly and unknowingly teaches to their kid how to survive in this world.And when the child grows up ,he accomplished all the survival task and try to apply in his life.Sometimes he fails and sometimes he pass and day by day he build up the confidence in him.Whenever he fails parents support the child and encourage him to take second attempt.And this how I explained my point of view regarding parents providing kids confidence and support. I believe in teaches also.They teaches our children so many different things.I would like to give one very simple example to support my words.If a boy wants to join a medical school and his parents are not even graduated,then what?Its A funny example,but have some weightage.Someone can't simply rely on home schooling.You have to send your kids to school for higher education,their they get all the guidance from the teachers. In conclusion, I would like to say that Parents are the most beneficial instructors and the best teachers.And Parents ,you also believe in your children give them time and provide the best answers to all their question and also ask Questions to improve the kids skill.It will also help in strong bond between the parent and children.Although You can't rely merely on parents teaching,But still all the kids will get all the best from their parents.

Hi Erin ,Thanks!