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Thank you ! :) I m triying to improve my writing before the toefl exam.

Some people prefer to live in a small town while other prefer to live in a big city. I prefer to live in a big city because I am a social person I would like to live together and interact with other people. The first and the most important reason is that in a big city there are lots of cultural activities. For instance I can go to the cinema, theater or museum and also I have lots of choice. Second reason is that I am a teenager and I like listening to rock music bands and I have chance to go to the rock music concerts in a big city. In my experience there are lots of things to do for a teenager in a big city. For example I like dancing and I can go to the dance with my friends. Moreover I meet my friends in a café and also we have chance to try new restaurants. Another reason is that in a big city there are many collages or universities and I am a student in a university also I am studying with the architecture. In a big city I can find a lot of architectural buildings and skyscrapers. Another major issue is that in a big city, when I am sick I can find a doctor easily because medical facilities and emergency services are easily accessible. Big city also has convenient transportation and utility systems. For example I can go to the school by subway in a few minutes. Today information is everything for people and internet gives us what we want to know. In a big city I can have faster internet service. In conclusion I would like to live in a big city because big city has advanced facilities and social activities and also humankind need to interact each other.

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· Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific examples to explain your position. For some people watching movies are more enjoyable and for some reading is more enjoyable. Both have some advantages and disadvantages. But in my opinion, I enjoy watching movies than reading a book. Firstly, for me watching movies giveS me a clearer picture about a subject or topic. We all know picture gives us a more detailed view than a book. In movies, everything will be in a visual format that gives us more information about a subject. For example, in harry potter books there are so many mythical figures and magical items. By reading this book we do not know much about a character. However, while watching a movie, we can know how every character is portrayed and how they preformed the magical items much clearer. Secondly, reading a book can take a lot a time and effort. It may take 4-5 hours to finish. The movies take 2 hours to complete. Reading a book needs more concentration than watching. Thus, watching movie saves a lot of time than reading a book. Moreover, we can watch a movie with our friends and family together. It helps to build a strong relation with each other. It is not possible in case of reading a book. Although, some people argue that reading a book will improve your language and can attain a good vocabulary. We can improve language skills by reading a book and also by watching a movie. While watching a movie, we can improve vocabulary and we can improve speaking skills too. By considering that the movies will give us clearer and more detailed information than a book and movies will take less time to finish than reading a book, watching movies are more enjoyable than reading books. I think it is a nice essay . :) congratulations..

5-)A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position. I oppose the plan that a large factory is built near my community . I have some reasons about this First of all, environment can be affected by the factory . A factory can destroy quality of air and water in the town. I like walking on Sunday mornings and I like smelling fresh air in the early mornings. But if a factory is built near my community , I can’t smell fresh air anymore. Second reason is that polluted gas or water given by the factory can destroy trees , flowers and animals. And also water pollution can poisen us. This is the most important reason that I think. In addition a factory can cause noise pollution. On the other hand, a factory drops waste materials. Waste materials can cause air pollution and plants and animals can be damaged by waste materials. And also our planet will be affected by waste materials, waste materials are one of the reasons which cause global warming. Furthermore ,a factory increases in using private car because people go to the factory for job every morning and they also turn back their houses. However, a factory has a few advantages. A factory can improve the town, many people will find a job in the factory and also people can migrate to the town. In conclusion , I strongly oppose the idea of building a factory near my town because I like fresh air and clean environment.