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Sorry, It has never been heard before. Forgive my ignorance . What is the content ?

A good job. I like your words style, it is powerful and concise and aculeate . design of the diameter of a pipe, -- A good example. Sherlock Holmes -- I like him too. I read whole corpus , what a pity it is not in english. I think the author always hide some important clues deliberately until Holmes disclosed it at the ending of story. But stories are very very absorbing and every ending is unexpected , I reading and reading exception the dinner and sleep. The most thing impressed me is his extraordinary observation. :)

I agree with pami , and some my points. making the existing complex technology simple to use is only a part of all. During Many other processes ( such as producing ), the simplization is important. Such as a large jet are made up of millions of accessories , the jet itself is very complex but basical accessories are very easy , they are bolts , nuts, gears, wheels, springs, etc. The designer try to get a engine with this issential accessories, then the engine and other parts are put together to compose the whole plane. And think about the calculous . THe space of irregular arch can be calculated by adding millions of space of rectangle. So we only need to simplify the arch as a series of variable rectangles , then to integral them for the extremum. Therefore, to disassemble a complex problem to many easy problems is a good way to resolve it.

The speaker contends that young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals, as opposed to seeking immediate fame and recognition. I strongly agree with the speaker and i firmly believe that the youth of today are very enamoured by fame, and hence need a constant encouragement to pursue the morefruitful long-term goals. Firstly, consider the usual college youth. Most of the students want to become actors/actresses, pilots, astronauts and so forth. Clearly, the students identify fame and recognition with these professions. However, a students profession should be decided based on their analytical skills, aptitude, knowledge and areas of interest. Councillers should help the youth find the best path. Clearly, the earlier such goals are identified the better it is for the youth, for they act as a constant reminder of what has to be achieved to reach the goal. Secondly, a lot of the youth of today are turning into dilettantes. One finds a lot of examples of such people in universities. They work in many areas and acquire a lot of knowledge. Nevertheless, they do not become masters at any area. Such a growth is harmful to both the student and the society. ( I wondered why could you get this conclusion ? If they did not break the low they are not harmful to society . YOur words are exaggerated . In fact I am a such person too but I don't think I am harmful.)The society identifies key people by their function. Having multifarious work areas makes the youth seem lackadaisical. One of the harmful factors affecting encouragement of long-term goals is parental pressure. Parents expect a lot from children, and even more so when such a goal is identified. Councilling parents is as important as councilling students. Although long-term realistic goals are good, some areas such a acting, politics would require seeking immediate fame and recognition. These areas stand on support of fans. An actor can make his long-term goal to become famous. On the basis of his good acting skills such a goal should bear fruit. Finally, i would like to say nothing can be achieved without hard work and diligence. Putting hard-work and diligence in achieving ones goals is much better than seeking ephemeral fame. The body paragraphe 's typical structure is the pith sentence followed by logical illustration and cogent example. As above sonali's essay is a good templet. And your beginning show your stance but there is no close structure to support it or to strengthen it , we need you to analys the topic from different angle and persuade us that your opinion is reasonable . All the impression is loose and weak.

Thanks for your trust. :) The advise advice given to Ida McAllister to help her in her quest to becoming a mayor, is that she should announce closure of parks in Lake City to automobile traffic. (reconstruct it , change the heavy head ) Considering the environmentally sensitive nature of Lake Cities residents, this action would help Ida gain popularity??.you mean reputation ? Although the advice seems good superficially, it is flawed( Sorry I donot know what is your mean, maybe Although is not right .). The advise seems to assume many things without providing concrete proofs. Firstly, the advise suggests that(to limit ) automobile traffic in the parks, (the comma is not necessary )would help decreasing pollution levels and also improving the quality of life in the city. To support this claim the advisee (you sure this word ? It means the student conducted by a professor. the author or the writer or the arguer ) gives the example of Plainsville mayor, Alecia Yu who issued the same prohibitions in Plainsville's parks. However, Alecia's actions may have been to reduce the higher pollution levels in Plainsville. No evidence is shown to prove that pollution levels of Lake City are alarming and would need some immediate actions. If the pollution levels are not very high Ida's actions may be detrimental and the residents may assume it was initiated to gain popularity. Secondly, assuming the pollutions levels of the town are increasing and action needs to be taken, closing parks for automobile, need not be a popular decision among the residents.(reconstruct it ) The advisee states Mayor Yu closed parks on the recommendation of a small group of citizens. Ida may lose popularity with the larger masses if she undertakes the barring of automobiles. It is also worthwhile to consider whether Mayor Yu's popularity rose or fell after her actions. Such evidence would be mandatory before taking a decision. Finaly,The advisee falsely assumes that popularity of Ida will increase because residents particpate in recycling and thus are environmentally sensitive. Such an assumption is baseless as no direct connection can be drawn between recycling and support of closure of parks for automobiles.(No one said they have relation. the crude topic said Mayor Yu prohibited automobile traffic in all Plainsville parks, and therefore was credited with solving the pollution problem and improving the quality of life in Plainsville. So I think the point is the automobile traffic in parks and air-pollution) It is entirely possible that recycling is a mandatory in Lake City, and residents dont always do it personally, to help reduce pollution. Again from this point of view, Ida's chances of being mayor may be severly hampered. In sum, i would say the arugment lacks evidences. I would recommend collecting demographic data of park visitors, asking them about their views on barring automobiles. Such data can statistically indicate the views of the larger populace of the city, and help Ida in her quest. ( the last paragraph should summarize all your reasons but a new one.) GO THROUTH MY COMMENTS.AND THOSE WORDS ARE GIVEN BY ONE OF FRIEND TO ME WHICH HELPED ME A LOT, I THINK THEY ARE VALUABLE TO YOU TOO. I checked one of ur issue essay , i wud like to make a few suggestions: 1. U seriously need a lot of improvement and hard work. 2. I wud like to give u some ideas a.Write only those essays which have 4-5 samples in the forum i.e., Older essays . First read all those sample postings and then make ur own essay. b.Do not keep on posting essays at such a pace. c. Work on the suggestions ppl make,after reading their views and suggestion rework ur essay. That wud help u gr8ly Hope i have not offended u.

If you rewrite it, I would like to give a score.

There are many factors influencing students' choice concerning enrollment. And finding a job after graduation is just one of the factors. The dean of the college thinks that by promising students about the job finding future after graduation would increase the enrollment ratio. But the students may have other considerations before choose a college. Don't you think these two paragraphs should be amalgamated ? A traditional beginning is safe and easy. Firstly they might be very keen on the prospect of finding job after graduation, but they may be more concerned about which kind of jobs they can find and what's the starting salary. A simple promise of finding jobs after graduation can not satisfy students' need. Foley college should try to provide more information concerning the job finding to attract prospective students. Moreover better job finding rate (what is that ? employment rate ?) after graduation doesn't mean that Foley college will win the competition against bigger and prestigious schools, because there are much more factors deciding a prestigious school such as faculty reputation. Well, in fact you against the author with two different reasons: 1 the quality of promised job after graduation is uncertain and doubtable 2 against bigger and prestigious schools is unconvincing but you put them together which make both unclear and less depth. Secondly students may consider the quality of the education is more important than the job finding rate. This argument mentioned nothing about the education quality in Foley college. A good education is some kind of guarantee to good job after graduation. They might want to know what they will learn during the college period, they might look long term about the career development instead of just looking at whether they can find a job after graduation. Then what they learned during college is very important for the student's long term career development. Furthermore, students and their parents might will also consider other factors such as the location of the university, living expense, tuition fee, climate of the area where the college is located etc. All these are not mentioned either in this argument. A bit hasty and short ! In sum, Foster College need to provide more information and do more other than simply promise job finding after graduation in order to attract more prospective students and compete against prestigious school. There are many good examples above( including mine, you can recomment it too), you can veiw them and learn some avaliable point. Imitation is necessary sometime. And don't depress ! In fact , stress is not a bad thing it is often supposed to be.

Well, it sounds reasonable. thanks your reminding.

Of course the score of 700! Show your best to them and no need else low score. Good luck ! :-)

Maybe b. sensitive tools can feel the slight things. bold person can make decisions. and is the word incincere in A right? I assume it is insincere.

It is a good one totally, you got points. Go through my comments I hope them are helpful.