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Hello, guys.Nice to meet you. Im actually new here and really need your opinions and suggestions on my TOEFL essay. Please DO correct me or suggest any better ideas to add on to the essay to make it better. Thanks a million for the help. :) Yes, I agree that parents are the best teachers for us. The reason behind is basically because it is a general knowledge to know that parents are the first teachers in any individual’s life. They were the ones who provide us all of the basic knowledge and assist us in our development in life, academically, spiritually and physically. Children can be imagined/described as a piece of pure-white sheet of cloth and it is the parents who are responsible to color it and shape it into something that will contribute to both, the parents, and also to the “real world” that they will live in. Besides that, there is also a reason in terms of culture. For example, as for me, I have a Malay-Kelantanese background. There are no other teacher who can give a better example and become model for me than my parents, who are both from a Malay-Kelantanese background, to teach me about the Kelantanese dialect, customs and other things from A to Z. By them doing this, our culture are preserved and protected from extinction as they have passed it down to the younger generations. Next, is in terms of religion. From them, we would be able to learn all of the basics of the religion we are align to . Thus, by having the basics from an early age, they would be able to top up their knowledge on religion throughout their lives and have unwavering faith. But wait, “not all parents have high knowledge concerning the religion” you say? Yes, that is true that not all parents are excellent scholars in religion. However, sometimes, those kind of parents will then send their children to religion classes to learn religion from the religion scholars. It is up to their decision on whether to send the child to those classes or not. And it is also up to the parents to push the children to know their religion and love it as a part of them as, for me, if there is no religion in your vocabulary of life, then your life is as if a hollow, lifeless and useless life that has no purpose and sense of direction. The conclusion is, parents are definitely the best teachers that you will encounter in your life. It is true that you will learn more things from other people for example, your teachers, lecturers and others, but, it is the parents who made it all possible for you to learn and have the life you are in now.