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I rated your essay using the free online tool at gmatawa[dot]com. You scored a 5.25 (or in actual GMAT terms a 5.0). You were great on almost all of the three parameters: 1)Coherence 2)Structure and para-formation 3)Vocabulary and usage. Perhaps a bit of fine tuning is required on coherence and vocabulary. You can also rate your essay yourself at gmatawa[dot]com. A free online tool, no login no registration, all that is required is an attempt code, for trial you can use "a12345" or get one of your own, on the site.