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Hi, Please grade this essay for me. Thanks. Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion. It is the threshold for the discussion of whether or not getting qualification at university in order to fulfil dreams have created sparkled heated debate within the community. Perception of people can be seen nowhere than television. Many people argues it is good to begin the career after finishing the high school. On the other hand, people believe it is wise to start career after finishing tertiary education. These arguments will be analyzed prior to coming to a reasoned conclusion. It is advantageous of starting the job after finishing schooling education. For example, people who start doing jobs after their graduation, will start thinking independently. They will start earning money which reduce the burden on their parents. Person start learning new every single day by having different duties on the field. These arguments will prove why people support this idea. However, the option of starting the career after the ending of college have more advantages in my opinion. For instance, Person would have the adequate degree and knowledge in order to get the job after completing college education which help them to get higher paid salary compare to the person who started working after schooling education. Person will be more mature compare to the high school kid in order to take decisions which might go in his or against the favor. It goes without saying that it is good idea to begin the job after finishing college education. After hashing out the pros and cons of these point of view, it is felt that the best way to start the career is after completing the college education. It is felt that, it would be best for someone to start the career after finishing post graduate degree in order to create achievable career.

Hi, Could anyone check my essay task-2 and let me know what estimated score I would get in my original IELTS?If possible grade me in all 4 sections which are task achievement,lexical resource,grammer and cohesion. Thanks. Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid? The issue of whether nurses, doctors and teachers are paid more than film actors have sparkled heated debate among the community. Whilst movie stars and company executives paid more possibly due to their work or popularity, however, the contribution of the teachers and doctors should not be forgotten. It will be proven in the following paragraphs stating the importance of doctor and teachers. Firstly, Celebrities gets paid huge amount of money due to their popularity. These people are watched by public every single day who get popularity probably due to their look, personality or may be controversial image. Furthermore, people worship their favourite personality in some countries; celebrities get the endorsement with huge amount of bucks as a result. On the other hand, company directors work probably for multinational companies where they have to bare different situations and have to make strategic tactics for company to get rid of it. These people are well deserved to paid high amount of perks. However, one should not forget the importance of community’s important people like doctors and teachers who plays the significant role in person’s life. These are the people who serve the community every single day for a good cause. For example, Doctors check their patient and give appropriate treatment whereas teachers give very important lessons to pupils which help them in the future. For instance, kids learn maths, science, English. Apart from this, they learn time management skills, traditional business knowledge, history and more. Finally, I agree doctors and teachers are underpaid compare to celebrities and business tycoons which are obviously due to ignorance by public. However, people should understand all the characters and decide who plays an important role in their own life and wages should be decided based on those criteria.

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Hi, Is there anyone who can check my essay and let me know my mistakes?I need to get band 7 in writing. Thanks in advance. Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people? It is the burning, debatable question whether or not media should publish the private information about the celebrity’s life. Everyday people use the newspaper to get the information about their favorite celebrities. These are the people who believe that celebrities’ life is not private and all the news should be published in public. Since it is true that celebrities make significant effect on person’s mind, they watch them on national television doing something extra-ordinary. People try to imitate their favorite celebrities as they are interested in becoming like their desired celebrities. They are fascinating knowing celebrity’s lifestyles, where they eat, from where they purchase their clothes and with whom they have a current affair and the history about their career. Celebrities work for longer hours to produce the desired output. After finishing longer hours of work, they expect to have some privacy for themselves where they can spend quality time with their favorite ones. This is one of the reason celebrities try to avoid interaction with media while spending their leisure time. Since they avoid interaction, they become the front headline news stating that particular celebrity is arrogant and rude. Media adds extra unnecessary news to add up some spice in the news which is enough to giggle the viewers and in order to increase their sale. Finally, media should publish the original news rather than the gossip as it would affect celebrities’ career and their fans prospective. It would be more appropriate if media publish celebrity’s achievements and awards to public rather than private pictures and rumor. The chitchat would affect the celebrity and they would become rude and arrogant rather than friendly towards media.