Happie

finally finished... i was surprised that i actually got higher than i expected. the conversations are sooo long, there is no short conversation...!! do u think i can get pass 240?? the eassy title is "People are never satisfied with what they have, they always want something more and something different." do you agree or disagree with the statement? it's done..!

thank you hfk, thanks a lot

Hi Carmen 21, i just want to say that you shouldn't use too many times of "good teacher" and "bad teacher", it is quite repetitive when i read it. you can use "educator"," professor", "well-educated teacher" "poor educated teacher" something like that, just don't try to use the same word over and over again good job, Happie

wow...me too!!! good luck to both of us

please help~~~~~~~~!!!! toefl in 6 days, i am getting nervous

please help me to rate it, my toefl is in excatly one week, really need you guys help to make me improve. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. We make many decisions in our lifetime, whether it is a big decision, say, immigrating, or a small decision, going to a park, the choices we make could affect our life in different ways. As for making an important decision, I agree with the statement that a person should never make a choice alone. There are lots of reasons for my point of view, and I would like to put them in the following way. First, the important decision may not only affect oneself, it may also have impact on people around him. For example, he decides to break up with his girlfriend. It is definitely not a very nice thing to do, and he is not only hurting himself, but also hurting his girlfriend. True, maybe there is big issue that leads to their breaking-up, but he should consult with friends or parents before he makes this significant choice. These people he consults to can advice him with an outsider point of view. Sometimes when he is involved in making the choice, he is confused in what is right and wrong. Second, teenagers are too young to make any important decision, because they are not mature enough yet. The adolescents don’t experience a lot of things in their lives. There are many things they do not know and never attempt. If they were to make a big choice alone, they would probably make a wrong one. For example, a teen is going through peer pressure, she doesn’t know who she should be friend with or who she shouldn’t. If she makes the wrong decision, she might end up drinking and doing drug with her friends. So it is very important not to make a significant judgment alone, teens all should ask older people for advice. In short, I agree with the statement that “a person should never make an important decision alone,” because this decision influence people around him, and teenagers are too young do make such an important choice. 331 words i always lack of idea in what to write on my conclusion, can u give me some idea in what to write other than restating the thesis statement? thank you so much

i really like ur introduction good work

Hi DmoOo3, first, i think you should divide the one whole paragraph into at least 4 paragraphs. second, i see quite many grammar and spelling mistakes third, u are a little off topic, they are asking you why you think the characteristics are important, right? but you went on telling people how to do, look here "You’ve to know Why are you going to school ? What do you want to be in the future ? How will you reach it ? You’ve to schedule your time . Study and practise you hobbies in the same time . You should improve you hobbies because it maybe one day you job . " you are trying to order ur reader what to do which is not waht the topic wants. i would give it a 3 nice try, though keep practicing, when is ur toefl?

Topic: Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings, or destory them and replace them with modem buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support you opinion. In the modern society, computer technology makes a country more civilized and richer. To indicate that they are the richest and most powerful, a country is built with the tallest building, or the longest bridge. In order to construct these landscapes, they usually have to destroy the old, historic buildings. Although the country may look very good with these modem buildings, I do not support the idea for the following reasons. Firstly, many countries or cities are stylish by their historic places. If they are destroyed, there are lesser places for tourists to go, and lots of people would miss the particular attraction. For example, if the Great Wall and Tiananmen Square are not in China, would there be as many as thousand of foreign visitors coming there just to taste the dim-sum and listen to Chinese? If Paris doesn’t have the Eliffe Tower, would there be even more traveling couples coming to this romantic city? I doubted. Moreover, the historic buildings are the symbol of the city. Without them, a city will become meaningless as if it has no history. The culture of the city would be gone. In other word, the city doesn’t have its proud cultural background anymore. There is no more history to tell, it wouldn’t be as educational as before. Educators and historians would definitely miss them. In short, I strongly recommend a city to preserve its old, historic building, for they are the attractions for foreign visitors, and the symbols of the city. If these old places are gone, people can only go to the library and find a book to read about it, and that would be a pity. 276 words PS. i found this topic hard,took me 5 minutes extra to do it.....what do you think?

thank you so much for ur comment, Santana

i would be very glad if u leave me any comment after reading, i just want to see how i do and what i should improve, thank you very much

please help me............. my toefl is on aug 20th....

i think there are too many paragraphs, you should compress some of the paragraphs together instead of writing 6 paragraphs, since some of the parahraphs are only a sentence or two. good job

please comment on it, i would be really appreicated. Topic: In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. Nowadays, there are many people wanting to go into universities and have a good job after graduation. In some countries, even before going into post-secondary, teenagers have jobs while they are students. I think this is a good idea, because of the following three aspects: earning pocket money, meeting new people and experiencing different things. First of all, as a student, his parents have to pay the tuition fees, school supplies and perhaps uniform. The parents have to pay a lot of money for all these. Because all supplies are very expensive, parents have no choice, but have to deduct their child’s allowance. It is a good idea for a student to go out and work. They might not necessary earn a lot of money, but at least he is able to pay for himself next time when hanging out with friends or eating in a restaurant. By accumulating his salary, he could reduce the burden of his family, especially for a student’s family who has a weak economic background. Second, going out and work, he can meet new people and experience more things. There are millions of different jobs out there. Each job has its own specialty. For example, my friend works in a shoe store. Before she works there, she doesn’t know that there are many names especially for the shoe’s size and pattern. She learns a lesson from “shoe”. Other than experiencing new things, she also has a chance in meeting new friends. It helps to expand his friendship. When he comes to the real world and work one day, he will realize how good it is to know a lot of people. If he becomes a business man, he can persuade his friends to buy the company’s product. It is a good idea to work during his teen-age. In short, having jobs while they are still students is a good idea, not only because of getting more allowance, but also because of meeting new friends and experiencing new tasks. Teenager’s knowledge helps the world to grow faster and improve the technology too! 346 words PS. do you think i should compare and contrast the topic? should i write both the disadvantage in working and advantage also? would i get more score for this? thank you very much

ya, i think it;s very good. well organized!