harmeet

hello, this is the second time I am giving ielts exam. please check my essay and give me some suggestions as well. Some people believe that children are given too much free time. they feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Many parents have opinion not to give excessive free time to children because studies are more important, so they should concentrate more on their school work. There could be various reasons for this opinion, such as, competition in studies, bad peer company and so on. However, children do also need some free time to play and for extra activities because it is necessary for their mental and physical development. Why parents have such opinions? It is important to consider this question first. Parents are more worried about their little ones these days, because, study competition in schools and company of hooligan kids. They want their kid to perform best in every subject without being spoiled. Thus, mother and father, both try their child to get busy with school and homework. However, it is also important for parents to understand that only study no play can make jack a dull boy. If kids are forced to study all the time, this might hinder their physical and mental development. Children also need time to explore their minds to develop and refresh new thoughts and ideas. For example, many studious kids afraid to speak and mingle with other kids, which becomes a part of their personality later on. Therefore, parents will have to understand the value of free time in kid’s life. In my opinion, preparing a timetable is the best and easiest way for parents to utilise child’s free time in an effective way. They can distribute free time in indoor and outdoor activities. Nowadays, parents have many options for their kids to join. Children can join different sports activities, music and dance classes, and art and craft classes according to their interests. In the end, I would say students need free time to play and for other activities along with the studies. It helps them to refresh their brain to get back to work with full enthusiasm.