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HI Maryanitha Your essay was really good, far more better then mine. It had alot of good points and you talk about different things about school, anyways you discuss important views. EVERYBODY!! This was was my first essay that i posted here, so we all have to start some where dont we. Whit practice i can get alot better. Gardol, thanks for the advise. Thanks to you all, i appriciate all your views. Hinda

HI everyone I usely use then, but now i have realised that i use it in the wrong sentence. I was wondering what is the difference between then and than. When can i can use than? take care Hinda

Hi everyone:) I am Hinda from sweden. I am originally from somalia, but i grew up here in Sweden. Being a member at TestMagic have given so much. I have decided to go on a english language course probebly to England and stay there for a year reading english at university level. This is improve my english and for the unforgetable exprience. My goal is to start the university of Malta and study psychology, this ofter the english language course. Of course i will do the toefl somewhere in between and hopefully succed. Right now the future is abit blurred, but i have to take it step by step. I would like to say thank you to all you for you help.:D sencerly Hinda

HI Shahmoja:) I totally agree whit, that Martin Luther King and John F Kennedy was great men. This is the mistakes that i have found in your essay. You wrote word, aginste, hostry, whait instead it should have been world, againt, history and white. You ended your essay by saying "they were a strong men", it should have been they were stong men. It was too short, you should explained what was so good about Martin Luther King and John F Kennedy. You also mentioned why you thought Omar Mokhtar was a great leader. You forgot one important fact where is he from? I have never heard of him that is why should explain alittle more about him. Other then that it was a good essay:D

Sorry Erin Will do that next time, i reply on a topic. take care

Hi Erin:) I found your essays intresting, i almost get the feeling to become a university student in England. In your essay you had alof easy mistakes, in another words unnecessary mistakes. The kind mistakes people make when they are in a hurry.:cool: sometimes you made grammar mistakes like "we get the visa" it should have been we got the visa, from time to you wrote UK write a alittle letter. You never wrote the apostrophe when you wrote i m instead of i 'm. The content was really good:D

Hi Everyone Would you please read this and let me know what you think.:) This topic of discussion is about the invoment and wheather it is truly being destroyed. I think it is wrong to destroy mother earth. Humans are being selfish, only thinking about themselves and always wanting to benefit from everything. Money making is important for some people, espacially in bussness. For example, many campanies have dumped toxic waste in the water and this leads to pollution. My solution to this is to make campanies pay when they behave in such away. One thing is for sure, when we disrespect mother nature we are accualy harming ourselves. Instead of always trying to benefit from everything, we could instead think about our grandchildren. What kind of world are we creating for them. Why should they be the one to fix the problems that we have created. We really should be thinking about future generations. This might be my own opinion, but if we continue like this we will eliminate ourselves. The judgement is here. Again, the government should take care of this. This is serious and should be taken seriously. Finally, in the 70,s people thought better of the nature. They were thinking about future generations. Nowadays it is all about moneymaking. Perhaps we should learn from them and change our attitudes today.

Thanks both of you for the advice.

Hi everybody!!!:) Can two people write about same essay number? In that case where do i post it? I post on the forum of toefl essays i know. But do i post like it like any other toefl essay number. Are there any rules that i should know about. Thanks

Hi Everybody!!!:) Here is my essay, please read it because i would like to hear your views. I perfer that the students do some of the talking just for the simple fact that we are all different and we use various learning styles depping on which multiple intelligence we are. There are seven multiple intelligences. 1) Linguistic intelligence:- People who have the ability to think whit word and use the language to express their thoughts. ( as in a writer, poet and journalist) 2) Logical-matematical intelligence:- People who have the ability to think logic and solve mathematical and scientific problems. ( as in a mathematics and scientist) 3) Bodily kinesthetic intelligence:- People who have the ability to use their bodies and hands more then the average person. ( as in a athlete, dancer, surgeon and craftsman) 4) visual spatial intelligence:- People who have the ability to think whit images and aprehend and create something out of image. ( as in a painter, architect and pilot) 5) Musical intelligence:- People who have the ability to aprehend high pitch and rhytm. ( as in a musicain and composer) 6) Interpersonal intelliegnce:- People who have the ability to understand and esamble others. ( as in a teacher, salesman, priest, politician and socail worker) 7) Intrapersonal intelligence:- People who understand them selves well enough to know what is behind the mask. ( as in a philosopher, psychologist, actor and writer) More or less we use all seven intelligences. Three of them are chracterized as learning styles such as linguistic intelligence, bodily kinesthetic intelligence and visual spatial intelligence. This because we observe information differently, some observe it by hearing, some perfer to read the concep to learn it, while others need to be practical like touch something. They made a study in a upper middle school in Sweden. The purpose of the study was to see if the students acievements got better if they were given the opportunity to work on their learning style compared to traditional teaching. They were given difficult subjects. The result of the study was that the acievements of those students who worked on their learning style was much better then those students taught through traditional teaching. Whit this in mind i think that teaching should be on the students terms. Every student should work on their learning style to improve their academic acievements.

Hi!!! Do a mind map, write down what ever that comes to your mind. Some it you will find useful trust me. Good luck

Playing games is same as life. Goes up and down just like a rolercoaster. Sometimes we fail and sometimes we successied. But trough failing we grow as humans. Hope this helps.

Hi everybody!! I havent done the toefl get, but am planning to. SO i will prepare for it by my self. Erin the books that u recommded are so many, how will i know which onces are a must. Guys Those of u that already done the test which books did u find useful. Thanks take care mvh Hinda