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Hi everybody: This question is coming from #178.The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer. What I think that one change is people will pay more attention to balanced life than just devote themselves to work. Do you think that this is considered one change or not? I am looking forward to hearing you soon.

Hi napoleon: I am afraid that what you write is not quite suitable for the topic. Since you are asked what events make a person an adult, I prefer that you should say what make the things different. For instance, what make adults can plan to attain their goals but children cannot.

Hi everybody: This question is from: #157: In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice. I am thinking about whether students can cheat by studying at home by using technology such as computers. If we they are at schools, they will be supervised by teachers during their tests. However, is there any means to protect cheating by using computers. Thanks a lot! I am looking forward to hearing you soon!

Hi crossline: I am not sure whether my comment is too late. However, I just want to tell you what I think. I am afraid that the third paragraph is not very convincing since there are so many gifts that are not violent and when we send to kids we try to choose some better gifts to them. Moreover, a puzzle game cannot prevent effectively children from violence.

Hi everyone: I am sorry that I want to change my idea about #132. Do you think a car that can fly is regarded to be a new product. This new one is intended to reduce traffic jams.

Hi miwa: Your essay is also very good. However, if you could mention some examples to support your following point: "There are children in the world who, like or not, take household chores.", it seems stronger. Or you could cut off this sentence: "Most of them appear to get more firm conviction and confidence in their life.", it also looks better. Some other mistakes are: “In summery, not just does participation in housework during childhood beneift a child in getting wiser. but also give them the feeling their being of great value. Therefore I support this statement.” "But also gives" replaces "but also give". I think you mistype “benefit”.

Hi tetyana: I think your essay is very nice. There just one point I want to suggest: 1."My mom always said to me when I was a child: “It is not necessarily for you to do all household work but you have to know how to do it." To do so is better than to do it.

Hi everyone! My question is from #132 If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed. What I think is about a robot just like a human who can help people for learning, daily life as well as for work. However, the robot can be considered a "NEW" product? It seems to have appeared in scientific fictions before.

Hi bigAtom: I agree with nam that your are essay is very good. However, could you separate the effect from songs from the third paragraph to the next one to make it more clear?

Hi boogieman: Your whole essay looks fine. However, how about to combine the second and third paragraphs since they are served to the same issue? By this way, your essay will look more concise.

Hi newlife: You do not compare the two attitudes that is required by the topic. How about shorten what you have written and add the other view as well as some examples?

Hi diep: I like your essay which is short and clear. WEll DONE!

Hi tetyana: The topic asks your preference instead of your suggestion. Moreover, you do not compare the benefits of two.

Hello nam: Thank you for your reply. Although we can make up a story, I still feel a little off topic if meditation practice is not a real custom. Do you think that donation is considered a Thai custom? I do not mean Thai alms giving but donating their money to the temples, their community as well as charity organization. They are used to do so during various opportunities such as new year or other festivals. For instance, I and my neighbors donate our money to our community for our public facilities. By doing so, we have the feeling that we are one unite. Other people give their money to temple or charity organizations to help to build schools and hospitals for the poor. The donation does not only help the poor physically but also help them mentally since the poor can feel that they are not deserted by society but they are supported by others. They may have more courage to overcome their difficulties. Donation is also good for donators themselves since the behavior makes them happy and they can also gain good reputation for them or for their business. If donation can be adopted by other nations, more people can help other more frequently, so this world will be a better place to live.

Hi rantutex: What I wonder is whether your second paragraph is a little off topic since it seems that the family has more influence on children rather than young adults.