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Hi everybody: This question is coming from #178.The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer. What I think that one change is people will pay more attention to balanced life than just devote themselves to work. Do you think that this is considered one change or not? I am looking forward to hearing you soon.

Hi napoleon: I am afraid that what you write is not quite suitable for the topic. Since you are asked what events make a person an adult, I prefer that you should say what make the things different. For instance, what make adults can plan to attain their goals but children cannot.

Hi everybody: This question is from: #157: In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice. I am thinking about whether students can cheat by studying at home by using technology such as computers. If we they are at schools, they will be supervised by teachers during their tests. However, is there any means to protect cheating by using computers. Thanks a lot! I am looking forward to hearing you soon!

Hi crossline: I am not sure whether my comment is too late. However, I just want to tell you what I think. I am afraid that the third paragraph is not very convincing since there are so many gifts that are not violent and when we send to kids we try to choose some better gifts to them. Moreover, a puzzle game cannot prevent effectively children from violence.

Hi everyone: I am sorry that I want to change my idea about #132. Do you think a car that can fly is regarded to be a new product. This new one is intended to reduce traffic jams.

Hi miwa: Your essay is also very good. However, if you could mention some examples to support your following point: "There are children in the world who, like or not, take household chores.", it seems stronger. Or you could cut off this sentence: "Most of them appear to get more firm conviction and confidence in their life.", it also looks better. Some other mistakes are: “In summery, not just does participation in housework during childhood beneift a child in getting wiser. but also give them the feeling their being of great value. Therefore I support this statement.” "But also gives" replaces "but also give". I think you mistype “benefit”.

Hi tetyana: I think your essay is very nice. There just one point I want to suggest: 1."My mom always said to me when I was a child: “It is not necessarily for you to do all household work but you have to know how to do it." To do so is better than to do it.

Hi everyone! My question is from #132 If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed. What I think is about a robot just like a human who can help people for learning, daily life as well as for work. However, the robot can be considered a "NEW" product? It seems to have appeared in scientific fictions before.

Hi bigAtom: I agree with nam that your are essay is very good. However, could you separate the effect from songs from the third paragraph to the next one to make it more clear?

Hi boogieman: Your whole essay looks fine. However, how about to combine the second and third paragraphs since they are served to the same issue? By this way, your essay will look more concise.

Hi newlife: You do not compare the two attitudes that is required by the topic. How about shorten what you have written and add the other view as well as some examples?

Hi diep: I like your essay which is short and clear. WEll DONE!

Hi tetyana: The topic asks your preference instead of your suggestion. Moreover, you do not compare the benefits of two.

Hello nam: Thank you for your reply. Although we can make up a story, I still feel a little off topic if meditation practice is not a real custom. Do you think that donation is considered a Thai custom? I do not mean Thai alms giving but donating their money to the temples, their community as well as charity organization. They are used to do so during various opportunities such as new year or other festivals. For instance, I and my neighbors donate our money to our community for our public facilities. By doing so, we have the feeling that we are one unite. Other people give their money to temple or charity organizations to help to build schools and hospitals for the poor. The donation does not only help the poor physically but also help them mentally since the poor can feel that they are not deserted by society but they are supported by others. They may have more courage to overcome their difficulties. Donation is also good for donators themselves since the behavior makes them happy and they can also gain good reputation for them or for their business. If donation can be adopted by other nations, more people can help other more frequently, so this world will be a better place to live.

Hi rantutex: What I wonder is whether your second paragraph is a little off topic since it seems that the family has more influence on children rather than young adults.

Hello Nam and Erin: Thank you very much for your answer. However, I think that the attitude of Thai people is quite difficult to explain to fit the topic. So, how about another one? Many Thai people like to sit in the temple quietly or it can be called sitting in meditation when they are free. By doing so, 1. people can find more about themselves and hear the deep sound from their hearts to know what they really want. 2. people can calm, control their emotion and help them reduce conflict with others. 3. It is also a good kind of exercise for mental and physical health. Do you think siting in meditation can be regarded as a custom and be adopted by other nations? Maybe people form other places even do not need to sit in the temple, they can just sit wherever quite place. But they can benefit by doing so. I am looking forward to hearing you.

Hello nam: Thank you very much for your reply. However, do you think that the characteristics is consider to be customs? I am very not quite sure about what I am thinking is correct: I would like the people from other countries to adopt the Thai custom about how they treat others: They are sympathetic, friendly, and concessional. Do you think the above can be considered a custom?

Hello num: Thank you for your reply. I have thought about "vie" -- Thai polite greeting may be the one. But I feel a little difficult to explain it into a complete essay.

Hi miwa: After I view your essay, I think that if you can give more details about how you overcome your difficulties in the fourth paragraph, this essay will looks much stronger. I agree that num is good at grammar correction, and her own essay has few grammar mistakes too.

Hi everyone: Especially for my all Thai friends, what do you think about this topic #80. Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice, using reason and examples. One more question: I cannot login at http://www.TestMagic.com/test/MenuOfXEssays.asp . Could you help? Thanks a lot!

Hi everybody: Do you think that my outline for #91 is too broad to the topic? #91. If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. I would ask Hillary Clinton: "what suggestion could you give to young women about how to manage their lives?" 1. From the aspect to plan life. (Hillary is a good life planner. she discover what she want and plan to participate politics) 2. From the aspect to balance life. (She has so many roles: a wife, mother, and successful politician. But she manages them well.) 3. From the aspect to deal with difficulties of life. (She survive from Lewinsky's scandal)

Hi Aladdin: How about use the comparison to support your choice and make clear that even the same season weather has many advantages but you choose another one.

Hi rajsari: The difference between affect and effect: "Affect" is usually used for verb -- influent. "Effect" is often used for noun -- result. If it is used for verb, it is similar to bring about.

Hi Erin: Thanks you very much for your reply. When I ask you:" Do you think it is safer to change it?", I mean whether you think it is better to change to other athletes or entertainers. I have really tried hard to find some others; however, I still fail to write any one into an essay. I fell a little worry about Bruce Lee because the topic say: you could meet. But for Bruce lee, I could not meet him since 1. he is dead. 2. I was too young to visit him before he was dead. This is what I am afraid to write something off the topic. What do you think now? Thanks a lot!

Hi Erin: Thank you so much for your reply. This question come from the TWE #90. If you could meet a famous entertainer or athlete, who would that be, and why? At the first, I think about the famous Kung Fu actor Bruce Lee. However, he is dead. So, I am afraid that I will miss the topic. Next, I choose one famous Chinese director Zhang Yimou. He has been a cinematographer, actor(for quite short time) before and (for long time to be a) filmmaker. Do you think it is safer to change it? Thanks again!