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  1. ok..i m in electronics field (ECE) and i m going for majors as VLSI, Embed. Sys, DSP.
  2. hey ppl, thank u all for ur encouraging replies...but none of u told me if it was an average score, good score or excellent score and wat kinda future i wud have w/ this score, tho' its not an excellent score.
  3. Hey ppl, i m done w/ my GRE and my splits r 530 V and 740 Q, i felt V easy compared to Q..but a 90 lines RC killed my hopes in V as i got only 2 questions frm it and i had to skip the last 8 questions. plz comment on my score guys.
  4. Readers may kindly note that due to some technical probs w/ my Word, i wrote this essay in Wordpad. So kindly excuse me for any spelling mistakes i've done. "Recently we signed a contract with the Fly-Away Pset-Control Company to provide pest-control services at our fast-food warehouse in Palm City, but last month we discovered that over $20,000 worth food there had been destroyed by pest damage. Meanwhile, the Buzzoff Pest-Control Company, which we have used for many years, continued to service our warehouse in Wintervale, and last month only $10,000 worth of the food stored there had been destroyed by pest damage. Even though the price charged by Fly-Away is considerably lower, our best means of saving money is to return to Buzzoff company for all our pest-control services." This argument describes a hackneyed problem in the food related industry. The evidences described here of the food that is damaged because of pests and the amount that is going into preventing it and in the losses, seems pretty supportive. But, on looking closely, we can see that these struts donot support as much as we expect them to. This problem is generally described on the relentless pests. But it is not described, what type of pests are really causing problems. Pest are of two or more types. A) One which damage good food B) One which attack after the food is damaged. It is, in a general case, the latter. For example, pests like Cockroaches which damage good food and pests like Flies which attack degraded food. Describing such an entity would give us more insight into what exactly is to be done to prevent the happenings. One of the most stumped premise is that both the Palm City warehouse and Wintervale warehouse house the content related to food. Because, its been said that one is a fast-food warehouse (Palm City), but nothing is being said about what is being stored in the Wintervale warehouse. It can be stationary, cutlery, kitchen equipment or any food that is processed and sealed. Its is very neccessary to examine two entities which are correlative. In this case, they are abstract. When it comes to numbers, the losses incured in the Palm City warehouse is clearly more than those incured at Wintervale warehouse. But its not been said as to what percentage of food is being affected by the pests. It could also be true that the Palm City warehouse stores more food material than that of its counterpart in Wintervale. It can also be true that the number of pests surrounding Wintervale are less than those surrounding Palm City. The ambience and environment are to be taken into account. It can also be true that Palm City could be warmer and hence more accomodating to pests. The management plays as important role as that of the pest-control company. The pest-control solutions are not a one time investments,the management has to take good care to sustain the work done by the pest-control company. The management should ensure good ventillation of air, light and temperature inorder to sustain the freshness of the food items stored. We know that when one of these elements is not ventillated, the probability of pests grows exponentially. It has not been considered as to what precautions or what arrangements the management has done to support the work that the pest-control people did. It all comes down to one important thing, the Hygiene. Hygiene doesnt only correspond to human body or the homes we live in, it plays a vital role in every field. By keeping a place hygenic, the pest problem will be derogated. The hygiene of both the warehouses should be taken into account before taking any decision. Here, its not mentioned of any 'hygiene' taken by the management. Thus, even in this case, the management is as responsible as the pest-control company. Hence, by examining the aforementioned examples, we can conclude that any decision taken taken on the basis of the statements expressed in the argument will not yield the benefits that are expected of it. The other factors are to be taken into account that may prove vital. This might also cost the management much less and help them to arrive at a simpler solution. The argument could be made cogent by giving the statistic details of what percentage of food is being damanged and what kind of pest problems they are faced with, in the warehouses.
  5. Hey people of testmagic forum, I m Kaushik from india and i have been told abt this site by BigDuke as i m going to take the exam real soon. I have been very eager to get started on the AWA part tht if i made any routine mistake plz forgive me and plz rate my essay. ARGUMENT ESSAY: “A new discovery warrants a drastic change in the diets of people living in United States. Two scientists have recently suggested that omega-3 fatty acids (found in some fish and fish oils) play a key role in mental health. Out ancestors, who are less saturated fat and more polyunsaturated fat, including omega-3 fatty acids, were much less likely to suffer from depression than we are today. Moreover, modern societies- such as those in Japan and Taiwan- that consume large quantities of fish report depression rates lower than that in the United States. Given this link between omega-3 fatty acids and depression, it is important for all people in the United States to increase their consumption of fish in order to prevent depression.” The report on omega-3 fatty acids concludes that all people in the United States should increase their consumption of fish to prevent depression. This report is based on suggestion given by two scientists. These assumptions made by the scientists are completely baseless and they are not, in any way cogent. Firstly, Depression is a state of mind where one feels sad and despondent. It has nothing to do with the type of food intake. Lack of sufficient food intake would rather cause in a state of anemia or fatigue but it never into depression. If not, the poor people around the world who don’t meet basic food needs should suffer from depression. In such a case, psychic communities will prevail over poverty. But this is not seen or heard anywhere in the world. Hence, this assumption made by the scientist is not in any way coherent. Moreover, renowned health communities around the world have classified fat related diet as ‘harmful’. Consumption of unnecessary fats, leads to variety of health problems like high cholesterol levels in blood, heart attack, overweight, etc. The unnecessary fat consumed is converted into body fat and the rest of it is used to saturate the oil and fat levels in the blood. To disprove health communities based on mere ideas will cause a radical change in the field of medicine. Furthermore, to compare two developed communities like United States and Japan is quite illogical. To compare or to be compared, the entities should have similar characteristics and conditions. The characteristics and conditions of people living in the United States and Japan or Taiwan differ largely. To compare these two communities is like comparing two uncertainties. There is no valid information gained from this study. Hence, by examining all these facts, the idea to ask the citizens of the United States to increase their consumption of fish in their food intake is illogical as its nutritional importance and value are not proved. Thus, this argument, in the present form is irrational.
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