Plz Rate GRE Issue # 021

[jenius321]

021: Reform is seldom brought about by people who are concerned with their own reputation and social standing. Those who are really in earnest about reforming a government, an educational system, or any other institution must be willing to be viewed with disdain by the rest of the world.

 

Reform is the regeneration of existing ideas and practices into a new form that brings a positive revolution.A True Reformer is always ready for unaccountable sacrifices to lay down his reforms.His inner motives are for public betterment and not for personal benefits.In the past,all successful reformers had to face unbearable hardships and then they able to achieve their goals.

Reformers have to cross innumerable barriers for illimitable time for thier revolutionary ideas. Buddaha is one of the perfect example in this context.He departed his palace, left alone his infant chlid,became penniless wonderer for forty years, After then he achieved the status of a reformer for his nation.

 

Reformers are also often disgraced,imprisoned,tourtured and even deportized.History is rife with such examples.Karl Marx was expelled from Russia, one of his adherents, Lenin also met with same fate.Nalson Mandela was put down in jail for decades. As history acknowledges greatness of unshakable faith and persistency in objectivity.They all stick to objectives and in the end fortune favours these braves.On success they were even idiolized, Lenin dead body has been embalmed and presereved in Museum as a founder of the new Russia.

 

Many times audiences do not show flexibility and for the reforms. In these circumstances reformer has to show examplary patience and wait for the right time.Karl Marx theories were practiced successfully when Lenin and Moa Tse-Tung after long time implemented them.In this scnerio one more thing is to be realized that truth ultimately wins, no matter how much hardships a reformer face if he is sincere and veracious and his reforms are revolutionary, his success is inevitable.

 

We must also admit changed chellanges of this age. Human beings now have awareness of religion humanity, for which he had been struggling for the past.Today man needs those reforms that make his life easy and luxurious. Ascitism is defunct now. We no more needs Buddaha's religious reforms but need "Great Leap Forward" like reforms of Moa Tse-Tung, which improves facilities for comon people and give them peace and economic relief.

 

It is also evident, that all Historic reforms were made succesful only by poor and suffering class of that time.Essence of reforms is hidden in its effectiveness for the lower class. Reforms by force or which lacks involvement of the people are useless.Hitlor revolutions and Martin Luther's reforms exhibit the same differences.

 

To sum up ,honest and devoted reformers bring great reforms and Nation salutes their heros for generations.

 

[awhig]

021: Reform is seldom brought about by people who are concerned with their own reputation and social standing. Those who are really in earnest about reforming a government, an educational system, or any other institution must be willing to be viewed with disdain by the rest of the world.

 

Reform is the regeneration of existing ideas and practices into a new form that brings a positive revolution.A True Reformer is always ready for unaccountable sacrifices to lay down his reforms.His inner motives are for public betterment and not for personal benefits.In the past,all successful reformers had to face unbearable hardships and then they able to achieve their goals.

Reformers have to cross innumerable barriers for illimitable time for thier revolutionary ideas. Buddaha is one of the perfect example in this context.He departed his palace, left alone his infant chlid,became penniless wonderer for forty years, After then he achieved the status of a reformer for his nation.

 

Reformers are also often disgraced,imprisoned,tourtured and even deportized.History is rife with such examples.Karl Marx was expelled from Russia, one of his adherents, Lenin also met with same fate.Nalson Mandela was put down in jail for decades. As history acknowledges greatness of unshakable faith and persistency in objectivity.They all stick to objectives and in the end fortune favours these braves.On success they were even idiolized, Lenin dead body has been embalmed and presereved in Museum as a founder of the new Russia.

 

Many times audiences do not show flexibility and for the reforms. In these circumstances reformer has to show examplary patience and wait for the right time.Karl Marx theories were practiced successfully when Lenin and Moa Tse-Tung after long time implemented them.In this scnerio one more thing is to be realized that truth ultimately wins, no matter how much hardships a reformer face if he is sincere and veracious and his reforms are revolutionary, his success is inevitable.

 

We must also admit changed chellanges of this age. Human beings now have awareness of religion humanity, for which he had been struggling for the past.Today man needs those reforms that make his life easy and luxurious. Ascitism is defunct now. We no more needs Buddaha's religious reforms but need "Great Leap Forward" like reforms of Moa Tse-Tung, which improves facilities for comon people and give them peace and economic relief.

 

It is also evident, that all Historic reforms were made succesful only by poor and suffering class of that time.Essence of reforms is hidden in its effectiveness for the lower class. Reforms by force or which lacks involvement of the people are useless.Hitlor revolutions and Martin Luther's reforms exhibit the same differences.

 

To sum up ,honest and devoted reformers bring great reforms and Nation salutes their heros for generations.

 

Hi jenius.I am not a good rater but would like to make a few comments on your essay:

 

First, explain the reforms brought by Buddha.You have mentioned his hardships but not talked about his actions that qualified him as a reformer.

 

Secondly, you should stress on those examples that the topic says. that is reforms are seldom bought by people who care about their status.Here you could have mentioned about various political parties around the world,that bring reforms with their ulterior motives of being selfish--> lust of power.

 

Thirdly, i find that you have slightly mixed with definition of revolutionary and reformer.Though a revolution brings reforms but you have to be specific here.

 

Overall, it was good. hope this helps you.