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hi i did my high school in india. and now i m in usa. i want to know thta for admission in university is the sat only main focus?? wil they consider my GPA and other activities???i got WES i.e equivalent to us education and got GPA 4.so what should b the score in SAT to get admission in RUTGERS-N.J.

Hi Today I Gave My Toefl And The Score Is As Below Li:27 Str/wri-12-29 Reading:23 Range:207-263 The Topic Was :people Suffers From Stress And To Reduce It They Do Exercise,read Books Etc..what Do You Prefer.support Your Answer Giving Examples. I Expect 4 In Essay. So Do You Think I Would Cross 214?? Plz. Reply Soon And How This Scores Are Given??? Thanx Dipal

hi good intro.well managed esssay.but u could even include that boss should be friendly and at same time he should maintain the relation of boss and the employee.other thing u can say is he should be enthusiastic and should encourage people to do work. this points would not make much difference ut just u can include it if u want. may be 5

hi welcome to the site. which exams u r planning to take??

hi welcome to the TM if u need any help this forum is there

TOPIC:Some people believe that students should specialize early so that they can develop in-depth skills and knowledge in their majors. Other argue that all students should recieve a broad-based education untill second or third year of college so that they have the opportunity to sample many areas before chosing a major. Which position do you support and why? College years are considered to be the best part of life. These years mould our persoanlity and determines our future. In these years only one has to decide his/her career and choose one's major. According to one's interest students choose their majors. But nowadays so many new fields are developed that students get confused. So I think students should recieve overall view of different fields and then declaring majors in the later years. Before coming to college, students studied all the main subjects like science, math, history, literature etc...By the time students know his/her areas of interest. But when question comes in choosing a field they get puzzled. Today, due to advancement and new technology many fields are developed. Many of the students are totally unaware about that. So by providing basic ideas and knowledge about each and evey subjects, would really help students to get out of the confusion. Secondly, students would get basic knowledge and information about different fields. So they could apply them in their day to day life. For example, if a student majors in a biology but knows the basic of physics, then he can use that knowledge in hid daily life like fitting a light or repairing something, so that he/she would not have to run every now and then for help making him/her an all-rounder. Some students recognize their interests only after studying and comparing the subjects. They even get a chance to know their caliber in particular subjects. So students get a clear picture of their majors and in shaping their future. SO college give these opportunities to the students. So I strongly believe that students should get proper time in deciding their majors. Because its the question of his/her whole life. Hence first year of college should be common to everyone. plz give your valuable suggestions and plz point out my grammar based mistakes. thanx.

hey nice essay.u may include that by doing same work one becomes specialize in that work and even acquires the speed.grammatically it is correct.so u may get 4.5 or more.overall it is good.

hey neves great thoughts.i really appreciate u for that.

too short essay.u r out of subject.the essay is one has a pet and should we treat them as a family member.u r writing on should we keep pet?? so don't u think it is off the topic. if u want clear idea check out Ziyod's essay on the same topic.

hey don't worry.practice it more and more.Barrons book for toefl is best.it explains all the basic grammar.you should first study that grammar fundamentals then u will be fine.amd try to read newspaper and some good books so u will understand the structure.

great essay.u may ger perfect score.no mistakes.good reasons.

In the future , students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice. How students study ın order to make their education effective? Whether using the traditional methods such as going school or using new tecnological equipments such as studiying with computers.(makes no sense) In my opinion , studiying at traditional school is more benefitical for students. There are a lot of reasons (there are so many reasons)for the (this)choice and ı (I)would like to put them in the following way. First of all, when people studiying(studies) at home by using computer or television , they do not get friends. In school , many students are (of the)same age and they can become friends easly . In this age child learn many things(from) other children such as helping each other or playing games. All of these activities are useful for child development. In the second place,(do not say that instead say secondly) student should continue study at school in the future because schools teach child not only lecture subjects (u could use something better )but also teach other personal qualifications which are an important for child’s future life such as, being honest person , helping other people,(do not repeat it) behaving good manner.(makes no sense) On the other hand, students do not get all of benefits by studiying at home. To sum up, studying at schools provides students many things to progress(develop) their personalities. In my opinion, all students should see school atmosphere, share their food the(to) other friens, have friend who is remembered all life and play game with friends . So based on all the above mantioned point, ı think it is better to study at schools. hi i m not so good but tried to point out u r mistakes. u have lots of grammaticall mistakes and spelling mistakes.u will not score high.hardly 3 or 3.5.u r arguments are not so strong. u need more practice.

thank u all very much.so i need to improve my language.i will try to do it.thanks once again.

hey good essay.in 3rd para u coulld say all that in one line.parent should not at all pamper their child.in 4th and 5th u can even include that they should be friendly. over all ur essay is nice with no grammar mistakes.u may get 4.5 or 5.this one is better than the last one.and don't feel u r writing worse.they all r very nice.u will surely score high in the test.

TOPIC:When famous person such as actors,athletes,rockstars give their opinions,many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions?? I found it very hard but still have written my thoughts.Please share your thoughts and give your valuable suggestions. Is there anyone who doesn't want to become famous? In this world there are many famous personality. These people excels in various fields such as acting,singing,dancing,writing etc...By showing their talent to the people they impress us and then they become a celebrity. Many shows are telecasted in which these people are interviewed. They tell us about their lifestyle,life-struggle and career. I personally believe that one should pay attention to their valuable opinions. The world is not full of magic that one would earn his name overnight.Behind their success lies the secret of hard work and determination power. We might think yesterday he was zero now how come he is on the top! But it is never like that. It is all because of firm determination.Many times we read about their philosiphy,difficulties they faced,turning points in their carreer etc...All these gives inspiration to us. They make us more strong towards our goal and their magical words increase our determination. Listening to them makes us think that in order to touch the sky one has to face hurdles. Many of the people, though having talent,could not reach to their destination just because they didn't get enough encouragement and great inspiration. Inspiraton plays an important role in the success which can be acquired only from celebrities.By sharing their experience with us they give us valuable lessons of real life. Their life struggle show a way to success by working hard. Listening to their pains encourages us. It is always wise to learn lessons from others experience.The interview of Dhirubhai Ambani,a successfull businessman inspired me a lot and made me believe in fruits of hard work. Thus there is no harm in paying attention to their opinions. Infact they are those stars which add sprakle to our arduous life. These shining stars in a worldly sky shows a direction to success. plz rate it as soon as possible because TOEFL is in few days. thanx,in advance.