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Hi nutan as far as your sentences are concerned. I think you should save enough time to read your essay after writing your essay. Coz at times with flow of thoughts we make grammaticak mistakes. in order to avoid this we need to reread the essay and reframe the sentences. Your essay did not have major grammatical mistakes . when is your exam im taking on 15 th nov how are you studying verbal and quant?

Hi! thanks for your coments next time i will write the points and connect them well

Hi! cs kumar thanks for ur reply. even i want to know if there are words outside barrons word list. coz i have prepared only barrons list. my exam is on 15 nov and now i want to maintain what i have learnt. for maths i have practiced from kaplan, barrons and now doing tests from arco. i have done few ex from rs agarwal. Hope this will help me to get good score.

Dear Nutan. inYour argument analysis you have mentioned two hunters but the author does not mention that. It would be wrong to mention things on our own. "Were they two hunters that a local agency gathered in a news conference so that parliament would sanction a budget for wild life conversation for that locality? If yes, then it is no point believing on it" try to elaborate a bit. here is my attempt on the same topic please give your comments The author has based his decision upon certain assumptions which may sound true initially, but after detailed analysis of the authors arguments it becomes very clear that his decision is based on fallacious assumptions. The author is trying to say that Arctic deer population is declining because they are unable to follow their age old migration pattern across the frozen arctic in search of food and conducive environment . Authors decision is based on the assumption that the dwindling of deers population coincides with the report which mentions global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt therefore, deer population is not able to migrate to different islands Firstly, authors says that local hunters have reported that population of deers is decreasing. It is very much possible that deerss can now discern the presence of hunters and protect themselves by hiding at different places therefore, this contention of author weakens the statement. It is quite possible that have become resistant to much colder temperature as compared to earlier time and have fled to those regions of arctic. Secondly, It is possible that deers have migrated to some other region where they can find suitable climate and plants for food. The author no where mentions if those deers who have migrated to the other regions returned to the arctic region. Thirdly, The author has mentioned about the presence of hunters in that area. Hunters can be one of the reasons of reduction in deer population merely coinciding of the global warming report and dwindling of deer population cannot confirm the reason of decline of deer population. It is possible that the effect of global warming is very minimal in arctic region and it did not cause the ice to melt. Therefore the decline of deer population cannot be attributed to melting of sea ice. Therefore, The deer population may not have actually decreased as assumed by the author. The statement that local hunter have reported decrease in deer population is fallacious. There should be proper data about the number of deer population in that area. IT is possible that the deer population may have decreased due to presence of hunters. So authors contention that mere coincidence of global warming report can be the cause decrease in deer population weakens the authors arguments. In order to prove his contention author needs to provide authentic data and search about decrease in deer population should be done by some research group instead of local hunters

please rate my essay. waiting for valuable comments My exam is close :) The following appeared as an editorial in the wild life journal. “ Arctic deer live on island in Canada’s arctic region. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of a year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed, and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately according to reports from local hunters the deer populations are declining Since these reports coincide with recent global trends that have caused the sea ice to melt , we can conclude that the decline in arctic deer population is the result of the deer being unable to follow their age old migration patterns across the frozen sea” The author has based his decision upon certain assumptions which may sound true initially, but after detailed analysis of the authors arguments it becomes very clear that his decision is based on fallacious assumptions. The author is trying to say that Arctic deer population is declining because they are unable to follow their age old migration pattern across the frozen arctic in search of food and conducive environment . Authors decision is based on the assumption that the dwindling of deers population coincides with the report which mentions global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt therefore, deer population is not able to migrate to different islands Firstly, authors says that local hunters have reported that population of deers is decreasing. It is very much possible that deerss can now discern the presence of hunters and protect themselves by hiding at different places therefore, this contention of author weakens the statement. It is quite possible that have become resistant to much colder temperature as compared to earlier time and have fled to those regions of arctic. Secondly, It is possible that deers have migrated to some other region where they can find suitable climate and plants for food. The author no where mentions if those deers who have migrated to the other regions returned to the arctic region. Thirdly, The author has mentioned about the presence of hunters in that area. Hunters can be one of the reasons of reduction in deer population merely coinciding of the global warming report and dwindling of deer population cannot confirm the reason of decline of deer population. It is possible that the effect of global warming is very minimal in arctic region and it did not cause the ice to melt. Therefore the decline of deer population cannot be attributed to melting of sea ice. Therefore, The deer population may not have actually decreased as assumed by the author. The statement that local hunter have reported decrease in deer population is fallacious. There should be proper data about the number of deer population in that area. IT is possible that the deer population may have decreased due to presence of hunters. So authors contention that mere coincidence of global warming report can be the cause decrease in deer population weakens the authors arguments. In order to prove his contention author needs to provide authentic data and search about decrease in deer population should be done by some research group instead of local hunters. please rate my essay. waiting for valuable comments My exam is close :)

Hi! awhig your analysis of the issue was good . you have dealt nicely. my suggestion. you should have elaborated more on refuteing the laws restricting use of hand held mobiles. over all good attempt

congrats cs kumar :tup: can you tell me about your test patterns specially maths section. was your issue and argument topic from the pool given. please reply im taking my test on nov 15

Hi! its ok azzi thanks for your reply :)

Hi Azzkikr Thanks for info on maths section. i m taking my test on15 th Nov. today i got my TOEFL score card I got 273. can you tell me about writing section. do they give questions from the pool of argument and issues.

Hi! Thanks for all that info. I am always doing silly mistakes in Quants section. In verbal RC really scares me. Today i took barrons test 4 and got only 1150 v - 590, Q- 560. My highest score has been 1320 . i really want to score atleast 1400. Dont know what to do :mad:

Hi! Congrats on your score. [clap] It will be really nice of you if you can tell me more about maths section. Actually i dont have maths background. what kind of probability questions should i focus. it will be nice if you can elaborate a bit on kind of word pronlems. looking forward to hear from you .

Hi! every body I am new here. My general gre test is on 15th Nov2004 I am taking tests regularly .so far i have taken tests from Barrons, Princeton, Kaplan and arco. My test score always comes below 1300. i want to score atleast 1400 Please guide me how to score well. i do not have maths background. In verbal i always make 5-6 mistakes while doing Rc questions. can you tell me about any link which would help take up Rc questions. i want to practice more quant questions as well. please suugest me some links where i can practice more on Rc and quants. Please help :mad:

hi! Erin i really like your website. Your website has been really very helpful. i have got good score in my Toefl exam. Now i am preparing for GRE. My final test is on 15th Nov2004 I am taking tests regularly so far i have taken tests from Barrons, Princeton, Kaplan and arco. My test score always comes below 1300. i want to score atleast 1400 Please guide me how to score well. i do not have maths backround. In verbal i always make 5-6 mistakes while doing Rc questions. can you tell me about any link which would help take up Rc questions. i want to practice more quant questions. Please help me

Hi! can any one tell me how to score In RC. initially i was scoring very less in verbal but now i have imrpoved.if i can improve on Rc i will be able to score good. Please help me :(

hi! im new here. My GRE general test date is 15th of nov. I am taking tests regularly but my score come below 1200 :( . how to improve any suggestions?