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Hello Sivadev, As to me I thing that your essay needs to be developed a bit. It is good one but not excellent. Also you have apportunity to rate my essay which I have just posted. Topic 0088 Thank you and good luck:)

Dear all, please look at my one and correct if something wrong. thanks :p 0088 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Telephones and email have made communication between people less personal. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Today, telephones and emails are the most widely distributed communication system by human. It helps us to communicate easily and safe our time as well. I don't agree with opinion that this type of communication could be less personal than another one. First, we spend much time for correspondence with our colleagues from regional offices. Daily we pass huge quantity of information to each other. Email makes all this work fast and independently. We prefer this way of communication because it is much more comfortable than buy tickets and fly to meet with our colleagues directly. Since we have email security system we also could not worry about confidence of our letters. Second, one of the telephony achievements is cell phone. It gives us opportunity to reach and to be reached by others when we out of home or office. We became mobile and independent on calls while doing our business. Cell phones also gives us opportunity to communicate with people directly avoiding misunderstanding. It makes conversation private and confidential. Finally, any type of information could become the common property of anybody. I don't thing that telephone or email system is most probable one. And I believe that it will improve and help us more and more in the future.

Hello. I absolutely agree with mayur :tup: . C is right answer... because Participial phrases MUST be followed immediately by the noun which is LOGICALLY responsible for the action of participal. Already having begun writing >>> John Jenning :p

Hello, How many days are we going to wait for right answers? :hmm: Here is mine... just tried 1.d 2.c 3.:hmm: 4.d 5.d 6.a 7.b 8.c 9.a 10.c 11.c 13.a 14.b 15.b:hmm: 16.b 17.b:hmm: 18.c 19.c 23.a 24.c 25.b

hmmm........ yes it is a bit confused me too :shy:

1. imaginary - existing only in your mind or imagination. 2. imaginative - having or showing new and exciting ideas.Things that include lots of imaginary situations... rich of imaginations. both of them are adj. I hope that I am right. if not ...could anybody correct me? good luck[heartbeat]

hello. Could anybody tell me the meaning of this word...i mean "porposal" ? Thank you.

Hello. 1. (b) seems a bit strange...a protogonist (is) what (is)... that is why I like (a) 2. equal to (smth.) >>> you should memorise it. 3. I absolutely agree with vreddy :) good luck.

hello to everybody! hm..... I think correct answer is A. ( served for >>> were served for) If I am not right please let me know. Thanks.

Hello friends. On one hand the sentence is easy enough on the other hand too tricky. Thanks to sininho for the quastion. And also thanks to hsengoren for the answer.;)

plz....evaluate...if possible thanks a lot :p Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Some people try to make life easer by avoiding things seemed new or difficult to solve. Other ones accept innovation as a normal life style. However during our life we always face with situations that are hard to solve. And actually it is not possible to keep them always off. There are lots of things that are hardly possible to keep out. For example, while working we try to be highly qualified by making our experience bigger. And it does not matter in which field we work. To make experience bigger means come to know things in which you were not well before. Moreover, family is inalienable part of our life which is also plentiful of such innovations as coming-to-be wife and later mother. This is one of the life novelties that each woman faces with out any experience at all. And it does not mean that they must avoid it. In conclusion, I want to say that I can not imagine the life without getting newness because I want to be full as a person from every quarter. And some normal things that become big problems for some people should not make us afraid.

hello ditoman! I got pleasure from your essay as usual :). 1. well organized 2. logical 3. nice Senteces are short and understandable. I always try to do same with my essays while writing. Good luck! [heartbeat]

Hello idiot. first of all I like to see you here. I mean this part of our chat. What about your assay.... normal..not bad, but I want to advise you something. 1. If you use such beginings as first of all,secondly, etc... your essay structure should be (introduction+1st benefit+2nd benefit...+conclusion) I mean if you have already tell us about the point of your view, in all your paragraphs you must support this. I think that you should change second section of the assay. 2. I think you need to work on the assay one more time. And make structure of the senteces a bit better. 3. Try always have well organize assay. It is just the point of my view and I can be wrong. If you want you can read many assays by ditoman here or find my assays. I don't want to say that main are best... no no no! I just always take care of well organized assays. thank you and Good luck my dear friend[heartbeat]

here is my new assay. Looking forward to hearing your opinion. [heartbeat] Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. While attending university the only thing that student should take care is education. There are many factors that create right condition for doing it. And uniform is on of these. That is why I like to support the statement that students must be required to use school uniforms. Firstly, school dressing helps the students to concentrate themselves on study and do not allow to think about such unserious points as what they need to wear each time before the lessons start. It also creates the best appearance for them as for students. After what, such problems as vulgar wearing or untidiness can not be possible. Of course school uniforms must create free movement for students and should not cause condition to be uncomfortable for them during the lessons. Such a kind of ferule always reminds them what they want and what they come for to the university. Secondly, uniform make all students on equal term not depend on social status of their family. Sometimes dress differences cause lots of complexes for some students and use most part of their brain while they need to spend it on things that are more important for them. By using school dressing students also have the opportunity to save their finances that they can use for such things as school supplies. Finally, I want to say that uniforms must be required and could not be omitted. If you really know what you need to do as a student, using uniform can not disturb it.

Thank you a lot wasleys! :p Know everything is clear enough for me. You helped both me and xizzu. [heartbeat]