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Hello Sivadev, As to me I thing that your essay needs to be developed a bit. It is good one but not excellent. Also you have apportunity to rate my essay which I have just posted. Topic 0088 Thank you and good luck:)

Dear all, please look at my one and correct if something wrong. thanks :p 0088 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Telephones and email have made communication between people less personal. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Today, telephones and emails are the most widely distributed communication system by human. It helps us to communicate easily and safe our time as well. I don't agree with opinion that this type of communication could be less personal than another one. First, we spend much time for correspondence with our colleagues from regional offices. Daily we pass huge quantity of information to each other. Email makes all this work fast and independently. We prefer this way of communication because it is much more comfortable than buy tickets and fly to meet with our colleagues directly. Since we have email security system we also could not worry about confidence of our letters. Second, one of the telephony achievements is cell phone. It gives us opportunity to reach and to be reached by others when we out of home or office. We became mobile and independent on calls while doing our business. Cell phones also gives us opportunity to communicate with people directly avoiding misunderstanding. It makes conversation private and confidential. Finally, any type of information could become the common property of anybody. I don't thing that telephone or email system is most probable one. And I believe that it will improve and help us more and more in the future.

Hello. I absolutely agree with mayur :tup: . C is right answer... because Participial phrases MUST be followed immediately by the noun which is LOGICALLY responsible for the action of participal. Already having begun writing >>> John Jenning :p

Hello, How many days are we going to wait for right answers? :hmm: Here is mine... just tried 1.d 2.c 3.:hmm: 4.d 5.d 6.a 7.b 8.c 9.a 10.c 11.c 13.a 14.b 15.b:hmm: 16.b 17.b:hmm: 18.c 19.c 23.a 24.c 25.b

hmmm........ yes it is a bit confused me too :shy:

1. imaginary - existing only in your mind or imagination. 2. imaginative - having or showing new and exciting ideas.Things that include lots of imaginary situations... rich of imaginations. both of them are adj. I hope that I am right. if not ...could anybody correct me? good luck[heartbeat]

hello. Could anybody tell me the meaning of this word...i mean "porposal" ? Thank you.

Hello. 1. (b) seems a bit strange...a protogonist (is) what (is)... that is why I like (a) 2. equal to (smth.) >>> you should memorise it. 3. I absolutely agree with vreddy :) good luck.

hello to everybody! hm..... I think correct answer is A. ( served for >>> were served for) If I am not right please let me know. Thanks.

Hello friends. On one hand the sentence is easy enough on the other hand too tricky. Thanks to sininho for the quastion. And also thanks to hsengoren for the answer.;)

plz....evaluate...if possible thanks a lot :p Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Some people try to make life easer by avoiding things seemed new or difficult to solve. Other ones accept innovation as a normal life style. However during our life we always face with situations that are hard to solve. And actually it is not possible to keep them always off. There are lots of things that are hardly possible to keep out. For example, while working we try to be highly qualified by making our experience bigger. And it does not matter in which field we work. To make experience bigger means come to know things in which you were not well before. Moreover, family is inalienable part of our life which is also plentiful of such innovations as coming-to-be wife and later mother. This is one of the life novelties that each woman faces with out any experience at all. And it does not mean that they must avoid it. In conclusion, I want to say that I can not imagine the life without getting newness because I want to be full as a person from every quarter. And some normal things that become big problems for some people should not make us afraid.

hello ditoman! I got pleasure from your essay as usual :). 1. well organized 2. logical 3. nice Senteces are short and understandable. I always try to do same with my essays while writing. Good luck! [heartbeat]

Hello idiot. first of all I like to see you here. I mean this part of our chat. What about your assay.... normal..not bad, but I want to advise you something. 1. If you use such beginings as first of all,secondly, etc... your essay structure should be (introduction+1st benefit+2nd benefit...+conclusion) I mean if you have already tell us about the point of your view, in all your paragraphs you must support this. I think that you should change second section of the assay. 2. I think you need to work on the assay one more time. And make structure of the senteces a bit better. 3. Try always have well organize assay. It is just the point of my view and I can be wrong. If you want you can read many assays by ditoman here or find my assays. I don't want to say that main are best... no no no! I just always take care of well organized assays. thank you and Good luck my dear friend[heartbeat]

here is my new assay. Looking forward to hearing your opinion. [heartbeat] Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. While attending university the only thing that student should take care is education. There are many factors that create right condition for doing it. And uniform is on of these. That is why I like to support the statement that students must be required to use school uniforms. Firstly, school dressing helps the students to concentrate themselves on study and do not allow to think about such unserious points as what they need to wear each time before the lessons start. It also creates the best appearance for them as for students. After what, such problems as vulgar wearing or untidiness can not be possible. Of course school uniforms must create free movement for students and should not cause condition to be uncomfortable for them during the lessons. Such a kind of ferule always reminds them what they want and what they come for to the university. Secondly, uniform make all students on equal term not depend on social status of their family. Sometimes dress differences cause lots of complexes for some students and use most part of their brain while they need to spend it on things that are more important for them. By using school dressing students also have the opportunity to save their finances that they can use for such things as school supplies. Finally, I want to say that uniforms must be required and could not be omitted. If you really know what you need to do as a student, using uniform can not disturb it.

Thank you a lot wasleys! :p Know everything is clear enough for me. You helped both me and xizzu. [heartbeat]

hello wasleys.:) I am really surprised. It is interesting to know this. Could you tell us more examples of such words as The Board of Education and crew. I am waiting....

Dear tiggerwoman explane me one more time question #1 I can't anderstand. Desiring to leave their own marks of identity inside the White House, most presidents' wives redecorate at least some portion of !! its !! rooms as soon as arrival there. rooms are wive's neither mine nor yours :) so... what is the problem :( ???

Hello uhcl. 1.(Desiring) to leave their own marks of identity inside the White House, most presidents' wives (redecorate) at least some portion of (its) (their) rooms (as soon as arrival) there. Of course you are right. This is the one form of “possessive adjectives” and they always indicate ownership. …most presidents' wives redecorate at least some portion of their (wives’) rooms… 2. The languages (spoken by) the Alaskan Eskimos (and) the Inuit of northern Canada are (such) (as) similar as to be mutually (intelligible). We know the form of >>> as + adjective + as. Don’t confuse with the form of >>> such + noun (noun phrase) + as. 3. A square is (a) (geometric) shape which is as long (as is) (as) tall and which (has) four right angles. I believe that we should not use “is” after “as”. The same rule >>> as + adjective + as. 4. By careful seeding, weather makers can encourage two small clouds to merge into one big cloud (and) produce a powerful thunderstorm. Parallel structure >>> to merge and produce. Don’t use “which”. It is not right. If you use “which” the word “produce” must be "produces". I really hope that I am right. Good luck. [heartbeat]

you are absolutely right. Smart boys :)

Hello to everybody. I don't thing that this question is difficult enough. But I was wrong, because I was confused ;) Don't have the same situation. 1) Because of their color and shape, seahorses blend so well with the seaweed in which they live that it is almost impossible to see themselves. Good luck :)

Thank a lot.

hello ditoman. I just want to say my thanks to you. I am really glad that you liked my essay. ;)

Hello to everybody. [bounce] I am looking forward to meeting with your opinion. :o Thank you. In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. Some students prefer to have a job while they are studying, because they want to try themselves in practice. Many of them believe that the sooner they start the more experience they will have in the future. In my opinion, I would not like to support this statement for many reasons. The first reason for this is that students do not spare enough time for studies. Since responsible for both education and work, they need to distribute their time that usually is not easy. Being busy during whole day, their brain became tire and after huge working load, students can not devote themselves to studies as much as it required. They also do not have opportunity to attend such places as library or practical works. It often causes many problems and effect on the grades at the end of session. The second reason for this is the lack of relations. Students, who prefer to work, usually choose distance form of education. I think that daily contact with both classmates and teachers can affect on the students much more useful than self-education. Since have big experience and knowledge in variety of fields, our teachers also can be the best advisers for us in our formation as a good worker in the future. That is why each of us must realize how important classes that we attend are. In conclusion, I want to say that while studying we must come to know as much as possible. And really we should not care of ourselves as a good worker in that moment. The time is running. And one day we will have much time for getting big experience, but we will not have chance to be good students any more.

it is easy ;) Can you imagine "greater by far than" with out "by far" = "greater than". You shouldn't have any problem with this. As for "by far" , its translation something like "of course" or "without doubt". Look for the meaning of this phrase in your vocabulary. It will be the best way :p Good luck [heartbeat]

Hello uhcl! [bounce] I absolutely agree with idiot. 1) - C (because this is complex sentence, where we have dependent (subordinate) and independent (main) clauses) 2) - D (because of meaning). Good luck :)