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Topic 174: Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice. Teaching is a hard work. Teachers should be careful in the lectures, according to students, teachers should change their teaching strategy. In the classes, teachers may give students a chance to talk. If a teacher talk in all leasson, students begin to be bored and cannot pay their attention to the lessons. And, for students, talking on topic in the class make them consantrated. Moreover, there may be something that student know, but teacher not. To begin with, Teachers should not talk in the whole lesson in order for students to be active. everyone has a limit of being concantrated. Aproximately after fifteen minutes, students lose their attention and do not understand what teachers talk about. Therefore, an ideal teacher should talk ten to fifteen minutes. Secondly, if a teacher stop talking after ten minutes, and give students a change to talk, many student can be active in whole class. One of the reason why student are bored is that listening to same people. Changing in voice, talking style and physical appearence make people listening carefully. This is to say, in classes, not only a teacher should talk but also students should talk about lesson. Last but not least, Students can know what teachers do not know. It is undeniable fact that twenty person can learn more that one person. Before classes, if students prepare lessons, and tell their ideas in class, they may give important imformations which a teacher forget. In this way, students learn more. To sum up, There are a lot of reasons why student should talk in classes. Students can be bored in long talking of teachers. And if students can talk in the class both students pay their attention to the lessons and more imformations may be shared. People, I wait your comment

I cannot rate your essay but I tell you two important mistakes; 1- Introduction is too short. It must be at least 3 sentences. Explain why you agree or disagree shortly. 2- The essay needs you reasons and details not examples.

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thanks a lot, as you said, I have a problem on articles. and What do you think about organization and content. is this essay take more than 4 ?

Topic 67: If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Being an employer is an hard work. If you are boss, it is not easy for you to choose worker. Workers who are experienced, may work at higher salaries. However, instead of inexperienced workers, I prefer experienced ones because you do not lose time to teach them work, they can teach you something, and although they work with high price, they work hard, and you gain much money. To begin with, An inexperienced worker loses a lot of time at the begining. According to work, it may change, sometimes one year, sometimes three years of time work can be lost. They cannot benefit you much. However, an experienced worker may not spend time on learning work. He spends only one or three week to adapt work, and he starts to work with a high performance. Secondly, An experienced worker can teach you something about work. In their old works, an experienced worker may gain a lot of informations which you do not know. By this way, You may learn how other firms work, and you may gain much more money. Last but not least, An experienced worker gains more than you give him. If a worker gain much money, he must do much work. This means he can work as three or more unexperienced worker thanks to his experiences. Althought you give him much salary, in fact, you gain much money. To sum up, an experienced employee does not cost much in general. He do not lose time to understand, and he may work hard. Moreover, you can learn a lot from his experiences. It is more logical to work with experienced worker. Friends, I take my toefl next week. Can you help me please. I need your comment.

Topic 180: In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Nature is significant and necessary for people. And, of course, it shold be protected. However, if it is necessary, ones can use it. In my country, economy of people are not good enough. More food, more technological tools must be produced. unemployees must find job. Also more living area needed. This is to say, there are a lot of reasons why more house and industry are needed. First of all, industries is one of the most important part for economy of people. Rareness of products, make this products prices high. lack of products make ones' hungry and poor. For example, there is no industry that products any part of computer. Thus, my country import all part of these products. Therefore computers are not used in everywhere. Many works slow down. For this reason ones can not earn enough money. Secondly, industries are needed for more job. Many people search for work. They have to find any job in orderto earn their money and look their family. For example, one industry is to say a good job for, at least, a hundered people. The last but not least, more house is necessary for many people. There are a lot of people who live in outsite. Moreover, ones who live in low condition, and have small and old house, occurs the majorities of people in my country. One blocks of apartment, for instance, may supply a hundred people leaving area. To sum up, due to above reasons, it is inevitable to ose more area for factory and houses. Industry can solute both problem of unemployment and nonexistance of goods. Lack of accommodation may be provided by building blocks of apartment. I hope, in the futere, all problems will be sloved and people will protect nature. thanks my friends

I am a Muslim and icondemn terrorists as muslim. These terrorists also introduce muslims wrong.

welcome Vex,I am from (istanbul) turkey too and I have been in this site for 3 months. I can say you this forum is the best site for gre toefl and others. you will definitely love this site.

another examples : an hour /our/ a university /yu/ because word's pronunciation is important in this

in addition, "which is" more formal than "that is"

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i did not understand what you mean. many spelling errors. can you explain ?

where must i vote ? i am from türkiye and my school is in europe, but my home is in asia . I am going to europa, everyday :D

where is "but also" ?

hmm. oke

thanks miporti and ish. I agree with you. first paragraph was fully darkened again :p what is the proplem there? I stole "last but not least" from essays scored 6. :hmm: it is a level of ones intelligence. But you are right. I had to use other things. moreover, i also wrote "ıq" istead of "iq". thanks for your advices again.

ı have not found any full practice test. But you can do some exercises in this link http://www.englishtestprep.com/toefl/tests/index.htm

Hello everyone. Today I take my toefl date, 24june. to me, I am not ready but i want to try once. What about you? Pls rate my essay. Thanks Humankind throughout their whole life gain experience whether fastly or slowly. Everyone has a different point of views about the idea of Learning from youngs or not. Some, especially old men, assume that young men cannot teach anything in contrary to those there are some informations that a young person has whether an old person has not. I agree with the second idea. First of all, children can learn from books. Reading is very easy way to gain informations. By this way, even children can gain a lot of informations. For example, my cousin who is ten years old, know that USA is formed by fifty states. In contrast, an old person may not know these, if he has not learnt or heart from anywhere. Secondly, traveling is another factors that change people’ . Ones can see different area and face with different cultures moreover recognize with different people by travelling. However, person who do not like these cannot gain experience. My grandmother, for instance, does not like visiting and going anywhere; therefore she is not good at relationships with people. But, a young man who travels a lot can be better than my grandmother is. The last but not least, ıq may supply people making true decision. Not only one’s years but one’s characteristics and intelligence also influence 'his or her decision. To describe, a man who is twenty years old can make better decision about company’s future than a person who is sixty years old thanks to his natural ability, intelligence. To sum up, as the above reasons young may teach olds something. According to me; reading, traveling as well as intelligence affect people' experience. I hope ones will broke this silly belief that there is noting youngs teach olds in the future.

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in fact, you must not do these [ı am talking about punctuations], but these changes improve your rating. I like your essay. even you can get 6 with a bit work before the exam and attention in the exam.

look at in your threat in the toefl grammer.

although, even though, despite the fact that, inspite of the fact that (sub+verb) ex: although I was ill, I went to school. I went to school although I was ill. despite, in spide of (N or V + ing if the subjects of both clauses are the same) despite my illness, I went to school. I went to school despite my illness. despite being ill, I went to school. I went to school despite being ill. However, nevertheless, nonetheless, on the other hand, but, yet I was ill. However, I went to school. I was ill; however, I went to school. I was ill, yet I went to school. I was ill, bu I went to school. these are only some. there are a lot of linking words different from these. look and examine essays. transitions words are generally used in essays. You can see many example sentences by this way.

congratulations what was the essay topic ?

good work. but you can use "owing to" or "because of" instead of using "due to" two times. like this, use "whether" or "even thought" for "althought"